
I Created the Immortality Club
我打造了长生俱乐部
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 9.5M Words
- Genre
- Urban Romance
- Subgenre
- Urban Superpowers
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 19h ago
- Source
- Faloo
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10 Old Books of Different Types, Must-Reads! Exchange Good Books!
Personally, I think Fei Lu is a better book. Fellow Taoists, please exchange books.
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After more than 600 chapters, there is not a single chapter. I spent two 30s and another 50s and couldn't read it for 50 yuan. After more than 600 chapters, I almost changed my novel. It's still the kind of novel that no one will read. This author has the nerve to let people subscribe. Bah.
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This book is for you to write. There is no love or women, and your mind is full of development every day. I think it would fit the book if you changed the title to Rootless Man's Road to Godhood.
It's really stupid to overturn the setting. I wrote 600 chapters of a good urban novel, but the next 3,000 chapters are the ancient cultivators who went to **?
Are there any people who came after you from a blind date? That one can obviously become a god! !
Ghostly write 635 photos of the whole family
The ability of time has been severely damaged. As mentioned earlier, the expansion of the time domain is a thought, and it can be activated subconsciously without any thought. No one can get close to him, and then someone directly uses speed to break the time domain. Why did you write the previous six hundred chapters? After treating your own time ability as an external force, it would be very funny to explore your own path. You have not studied time thoroughly, so you think it is better to explore yourself when time is an external force. How funny is it? Completely overturn all settings, okay?
You are a time traveler, how can you not know the difference between having power and not having power? Is there any use for just having money? No matter how rich you are, it's still someone else's pocket, why the hell do you still want to be like Tiao*?
It was hard to watch when Shen Youchu came out. Her family background and everything else were all based on Shen Youchu's template. I don't know what your problem is. If you don't write the original heroine, you have to make a copy. Before Shen came out, the male protagonist was so crisp and clear in beckoning his subordinates. After Shen came out, the male protagonist changed. He didn't recruit directly like other people before. He first arranged for his subordinates to secretly protect Shen, and then arranged for his subordinates to send Shen a gift in the name of winning a prize. He also arranged for his subordinates to go to the fast food restaurant where Shen went every day... No, buddy, what are you doing? Did writing a book inspire Tian Gou's psychology? If you want the protagonist to fall in love with that Shen, wouldn't it be impossible to just recruit him? This must be done. **Man, you have a lot of skills. Your way of writing has made me jump directly to Shen every time I see him coming out. The following is even more outrageous. The protagonist travels back to the Qing Dynasty and directly takes Shen with him. I can only say that you are awesome, I am **.
The first 500 chapters are good. If you change your cultivation, it will be cliché or bad.
Anyway, after more than 600, it will be another novel, which is a trap.
Didn't the author himself say that this is a farming article? What I wrote before is about developing forces and developing technology, but inexplicably later it turned into fantasy and started practicing cultivation. If you write about the recovery of spiritual energy, it will lose its original characteristics. There are a lot of behind-the-scenes writings, so why should I read your book?
There is no need to read after chapter 656. It changes directly from a modern novel to an ancient immortal cultivation novel, which is equivalent to directly discarding the content of the previous 600 chapters, as if it is a new book.
I can still take a look at the front, but when I look at the table of contents later, I don't even know what's written there?
I endured it, jumped to see the baby, and died. I wish the author and his whole family will die violently. It's true that the more you think about it, the angrier you are. It doesn't matter if you are too cheap. You came to lie to me. Your mother will die violently.
I went through the mountains to find the novel from the comics in the middle of the night, and it turned out that I was a ** who started high and went low, low, low, low, low, and wasted my feelings.
It was a good book at the beginning, but everything went wrong at the end. Two thousand chapters have not come out after entering the long river of time? What is this for playing? Thousands of chapters were ghostwritten, right? **
I think it's almost enough to accept Hinata, Tsunade, Kurenai, Konan, Terumi Mei, and Ye Cang. There are too many other brainless ones and it's boring.
Obviously we can have independent laws. Even if we don't want to have independent laws, there is no need to do it globally. Isn't it the same as doing it on a small scale? But he insists on some kind of global spiritual energy recovery. He is cheating himself. There is something wrong with his brain.
Developing power every day and not having fun early is no different from the walking zombies. Humans are not machines. Even if they are immortal, it would be crazy to stay alone there every day and not go crazy. . Could it be that the way to vent is development?
Damn it, this book is still being written, is it so awesome?
Is my memory confused? I thought the first aristocratic family should be named Rong.
From this chapter onwards, everything is in a mess. Settings that were not mentioned before are immediately present here. When did the male protagonist have the Supreme Immortal Eyes, and when did the male protagonist have such a character? It is really messy. It is just random writing and random additions without any foreshadowing. If what I say is wrong, everyone can criticize me.
Did the author change after more than 600 chapters? ! It's just a hodgepodge that becomes more and more outrageous the more you look at it.
Wu-brained Shuang at least highlights the word "shuang", while this author Wu-brain only highlights the word "awkward".
You already have such a strong ability to exchange RMB and US dollars every day, and you are still afraid of national sanctions? ? ? ? What the hell? It's like I'm a bodybuilding champion, but I'm still very scared of a three-year-old child. I have to ask him for instructions on everything I do? What the hell are you writing? If you can't write, don't write it. You also said that the hacker is a performing personality. The character you wrote yourself is just a performing personality. What the hell?
To be honest, I can read it before 500 chapters, but forget about it after that. I have no desire to read it anymore. I'm talking too much about it. No wonder it can write more than 3,000 chapters. Fortunately, I didn't pay for it on Feilu.
The first few chapters are directly about gods, and the later chapters are written directly from the city into fantasy, and all the money is lost.
A book that can become a god, no matter how awesome the early setting is, it can't compare to the money ghostwriting
I just read chapter 300. Is there any ghostwriting later?