Feilu editor strongly recommends it, the most heart-warming Naruto masterpiece!
God-level template system at hand.
Facing the heaven-defying ninjutsu in the character template.
The first is substitution; the second is combination.
Are other gods, immortal modes, and samsara eyes very strong? Replace them all!
Combination:
To deal with the Third Raikage, use the Flying Thunder God Technique + Weighted Rock Technique + Dust Release = completely break the defense!
To deal with Madara, super magnification technique + eight-door armor formation = like crushing ants to death, it will lead to a big ending!
A group of melon-eating ninjas:
"Is he still a human? He can actually switch between... The Tsanseigan, the Rinnegan, and the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan at will!"
"Look, he has tiger marks on his hands...
... This technique seems to be Konoha's secret ninjutsu——
——Millennium Killing! "
This novel and its characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.
Reader comments
一天你送进去好几十人,你小子真特娘的是个人才!
Brother, can you please stop writing blindly, will Lu Fei, a member of the Yan Party, like Gao Yao?
The Qin army is still around, and it should be very strong. It has been more than two thousand years. Since then, it has begun to study technology or cultivate immortality (the elixir of life is already available, I think there must be a cultivation system, unless technology replaces it). I think the protagonist can be invincible!
Are pirates so powerful that they can cover the sky? What outrageous words
How dare you shake your head when the Hokage talks about the Will of Fire, without fear of being seen?
Everyone hates Naruto, but the protagonist becomes friends with him. He is not afraid of Sandai checking him out. He has no brains.
Why does it feel like the taste has changed since the beginning of Ultraman? The content in later chapters begins to be fragmented, with a hammer here and a stick here and there? Has someone been replaced?
What is this written about? Zhu Qizhen was still prodigal outside, so Zhu Qiyu ascended the throne in the capital?
*Wow, it's a very good outline. It's so well written that it's so exciting.
十几章连个篮球的影子都没有
Minato is in the Seal of the Dead, do you understand? How did you get reincarnated?
I haven't wanted to watch Sakura Sakura since I started watching it. I used to think Sakura was bad, but now I realize there's nothing wrong with Sakura.
Naruto's wife has been kidnapped by you** You also said that Naruto's fate as a woman comes later, doesn't your conscience hurt? You guys don't know how to write fan fiction if you don't accept women, right? The emotional scenes are so poorly written and you still like to have a harem.
Naruto's energy is a hundred times that of Kakashi. If Naruto wants to suppress the Nine-Tails, it will be ten times that of Kakashi. This is what Kakashi said himself. Look at what the author wrote. Kakashi is four, and he can float seven out of six. Naruto's is eight. If you don't write four hundred, forget it. If you are a copy of Naruto and suppress the Nine-Tails, that is also forty. Doesn't it count?
I really hate this protagonist, Zha Zhajiang
I vomited when I saw Hinata in the first picture. I am an original fan.
I feel relieved when I see so many people complaining.
Update soon! Thirty thousand words a day is not difficult, right?
I was speechless when I just watched it. Damn, he worries every day that his sister will get into trouble when she goes on patrol. But how much money did you get from doing system tasks? If you get a citizen status first, you won't have to go on patrol. While writing about my worries, I first focused on improving my own strength. What kind of protagonist is this TM writing about?
In other words, it's not fun when you meet the Eight Kings.
How should I put it? It can be seen that the author put his heart into writing, but it has to be said that for the sake of sensationalism, the author was too deliberate, and many settings are unreasonable. When the protagonist approaches Naruto, the third generation is not only not wary, but is actually happy to see it happen? This is impossible. As the controller of the village, it would have been impossible for the news of the demon fox to spread throughout the village without the acquiescence of the third generation. He did this to gain a sense of presence when Naruto was sad, to gain trust and dependence, and to control him; otherwise, it would be impossible to explain his contradictory behavior of saying that he wanted to treat Naruto well while not stopping the rumors and allowing the villagers to wrongly accuse Naruto without mentioning that he was the son of a hero! Therefore, it is impossible for him to allow others to gain Naruto's trust, not even Danzo, because it will affect his interests!
Therefore, the content in the book is not reasonable at all, and compared to the emotional drama, I think the vast majority of readers read Naruto fan fiction more for the elements of strength and becoming stronger. The author is completely putting the cart before the horse.
The author's time period is wrong, Uchiha was already gone when he went to ninja school. . .
This novel is not bad, I like that you wrote this novel
Regarding the Western Chu Empire, "Chu-Han: I am the Overlord of Chu" Chapter 123 Liu Bang attacks Han Xin (please subscribe) Chapter review.
Commentary on Chapter 86: Kirigakure Joins the War in "Konoha's Beginning Lets the Rope Tree Spiral to the Sky" written by Akira Ryūgan.
About "Genshin Impact: The Strongest Liquor Swordsman at the Beginning" written by the grumpy old man! Chapter 33: Joel's father! Abedo's silence! Chapter review.
一天你送进去好几十人,你小子真特娘的是个人才!
Brother, can you please stop writing blindly, will Lu Fei, a member of the Yan Party, like Gao Yao?
The Qin army is still around, and it should be very strong. It has been more than two thousand years. Since then, it has begun to study technology or cultivate immortality (the elixir of life is already available, I think there must be a cultivation system, unless technology replaces it). I think the protagonist can be invincible!
Are pirates so powerful that they can cover the sky? What outrageous words
How dare you shake your head when the Hokage talks about the Will of Fire, without fear of being seen?
Everyone hates Naruto, but the protagonist becomes friends with him. He is not afraid of Sandai checking him out. He has no brains.
Why does it feel like the taste has changed since the beginning of Ultraman? The content in later chapters begins to be fragmented, with a hammer here and a stick here and there? Has someone been replaced?
What is this written about? Zhu Qizhen was still prodigal outside, so Zhu Qiyu ascended the throne in the capital?
*Wow, it's a very good outline. It's so well written that it's so exciting.
十几章连个篮球的影子都没有
Minato is in the Seal of the Dead, do you understand? How did you get reincarnated?
I haven't wanted to watch Sakura Sakura since I started watching it. I used to think Sakura was bad, but now I realize there's nothing wrong with Sakura.
Naruto's wife has been kidnapped by you** You also said that Naruto's fate as a woman comes later, doesn't your conscience hurt? You guys don't know how to write fan fiction if you don't accept women, right? The emotional scenes are so poorly written and you still like to have a harem.
Naruto's energy is a hundred times that of Kakashi. If Naruto wants to suppress the Nine-Tails, it will be ten times that of Kakashi. This is what Kakashi said himself. Look at what the author wrote. Kakashi is four, and he can float seven out of six. Naruto's is eight. If you don't write four hundred, forget it. If you are a copy of Naruto and suppress the Nine-Tails, that is also forty. Doesn't it count?
I really hate this protagonist, Zha Zhajiang
I vomited when I saw Hinata in the first picture. I am an original fan.
I feel relieved when I see so many people complaining.
Update soon! Thirty thousand words a day is not difficult, right?
I was speechless when I just watched it. Damn, he worries every day that his sister will get into trouble when she goes on patrol. But how much money did you get from doing system tasks? If you get a citizen status first, you won't have to go on patrol. While writing about my worries, I first focused on improving my own strength. What kind of protagonist is this TM writing about?
In other words, it's not fun when you meet the Eight Kings.
你能不能不要水,一个破*聚会你写十几章都不完,你都不知道读者想看什么你就写小说啊,你能赚到钱就见鬼了
How should I put it? It can be seen that the author put his heart into writing, but it has to be said that for the sake of sensationalism, the author was too deliberate, and many settings are unreasonable. When the protagonist approaches Naruto, the third generation is not only not wary, but is actually happy to see it happen? This is impossible. As the controller of the village, it would have been impossible for the news of the demon fox to spread throughout the village without the acquiescence of the third generation. He did this to gain a sense of presence when Naruto was sad, to gain trust and dependence, and to control him; otherwise, it would be impossible to explain his contradictory behavior of saying that he wanted to treat Naruto well while not stopping the rumors and allowing the villagers to wrongly accuse Naruto without mentioning that he was the son of a hero! Therefore, it is impossible for him to allow others to gain Naruto's trust, not even Danzo, because it will affect his interests! Therefore, the content in the book is not reasonable at all, and compared to the emotional drama, I think the vast majority of readers read Naruto fan fiction more for the elements of strength and becoming stronger. The author is completely putting the cart before the horse.
The author's time period is wrong, Uchiha was already gone when he went to ninja school. . .
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这评论区,让我感觉慌的一批啊
关于昨夜小桥流水所著《影视:基因融合,开局第七穿插连》 第六章 炮轰美军(求鲜花,求评价票) 章节点评。
This novel is not bad, I like that you wrote this novel
Regarding the Western Chu Empire, "Chu-Han: I am the Overlord of Chu" Chapter 123 Liu Bang attacks Han Xin (please subscribe) Chapter review.
Commentary on Chapter 86: Kirigakure Joins the War in "Konoha's Beginning Lets the Rope Tree Spiral to the Sky" written by Akira Ryūgan.
About "Genshin Impact: The Strongest Liquor Swordsman at the Beginning" written by the grumpy old man! Chapter 33: Joel's father! Abedo's silence! Chapter review.