Demon Slayer: Start with a Zanpakutō

All the ghosts in Demon Slayer will be put to death. Demon Slayer is so awesome because of you.

Directly in Demon Slayer, the combat effectiveness collapsed. Also, how could the cyan Higanbana be discovered? Infinite City was clearly blessed by Naruto's Vampire Technique. How could Muzan be fused? And how could there be a love pillar when Kanae Hui was not dead? How could Enzhu be the eldest brother at that time? How old was Yaoya's son and daughter when he participated in the Demon Slayer Exam four years ago? How old were the little brats who were going to host it for you? If you don't know, you can go to the Tieba forum to check it out. If Wu Mei can find the blue Higanhua Douzi, how can he lead to the final decisive battle? No miserable character to ambush the royal princess? What a joke. Tanjiro's house was visited by Muzan in person, not Heishimou, otherwise he wouldn't have attacked Muzan on the street in the shallow area. If Muzan had dared to attack the royal family and saw Tanjiro, he would have sent Touzhu away on the street.

What kind of joke are you kidding me when you want to fight a black man, but you still need to play the second stage of Gui Ren?

Really, I don't understand why Senbonzakura can be called handsome, shouldn't she be called feminine and beautiful? I feel like this knife is suitable for someone like Cai Xukun. Men should use kitchen knives! ! ! !

The power system of the Shinigami has surpassed Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba. There is no comparison.

? The back-and-forth fight between Nakai and Demon Slayer is somewhat humorous.

I just read the first few chapters and I feel that it is not good. The description of the characters is not like the original work at all. Since you are writing a fanfic, the character's character cannot be wrong. If you change the character, write down the reasons. In addition, there is no such thing in the original version of Kurika Falling Leaf Sakura Demon Slayer. The Butterfly Ninja should have had a bit of a tsundere character before his sister's death. He was not so soft. The Butterfly Ninja said "Hey, hey~" as soon as he came on. It felt like he was forcing a joke. Byakuya Kuchiki gave him a knife when he came up. Don't you think it's very abrupt? The process of chatting with people in chat ** is awkward. Have you never chatted in ** chat? It's really embarrassing to write it like this. Your writing style is biased, but you can tell from your pen name that your writing style is just like that. In addition, the original book emphasizes not joining the party, otherwise you will be mad.

没意思，见一个上一个，上一个丢一个，建议去写小黄文比较好

Forgive me for talking too much, Qiangwei doesn't like Ge Xiaolun, Qiangwei belongs to Liang Bing

Is it like the final crescent moon, the residual fire sword, and the power of omniscience and omnipotence have to be arranged? Strength**,**

The author has never even read Demon Slayer, and came to write a novel based on hearsay. A lot of character settings and logic are wrong, and he completely treats the readers as fools. You are still writing a fanfic, you are not worthy.

The first time I drank water, the first time I drank a sip of water, the first time I drank a glass of water, the first time I drank two glasses of water... The first time I drank a bottle of water... The first time I drank a sip of apple juice,... I am invincible just by drinking anything...

Who is Ye Ying? Is Kana willing to speak until she meets Tanjiro? How did the Butterfly Man know about the existence of the Hand Ghost? *Nothing makes sense

It's all revisions, just look at the hammer!

It's just random writing.

The last quarter of the Twelve Ghost Moon is nearly halfway, doesn't that mean two people were killed?

The world background is so big, author, can you hold on?

I used to hate constancy. When I knew about his existence, I felt a sense of disgust for no reason. Now after reading your book, I hate him even more.

You don't need to say "first solution" when you start to solve it. Thank you.

The most poisonous thing is that the big guys in Chizhi Chat** change the characters of Kuang San and others. The protagonist is too pretentious13, talks arrogantly, borrows his power from others and is arrogant, likes to talk things over, builds buffs before battle, is too arrogant The author also likes the word "water" to subjugate intelligence and ghosts and destroy the heroine group.

After subscribing**, it shows that the author is refining and there is no content. Miserable. When can we see it?

Could you please tell me who the heroine is?

Brother, I have been subscribing to your books, but you are talking nonsense, right? Is Senbonzakura an immortal demon with a Zanpakutō? Did you lower the Death God's Zanpakutō to the level of Demon Slayer? Is it so difficult for Swastika to kill ghosts? The timeline is also wrong? Author, are you kidding me?

万磁王的能力在夜之城＝？

Why not say that both women are goddesses?

关于放开那只沙奈朵所著《人在精灵：开局与透子一起拍电影》 第七十章：吻戏（一万八千花加更） 章节点评。

The heroine is Queen Mother Nuwa. How many heroines are there? Exclusive exercises, Supreme Promise Sutra, three cultivations of essence, energy and spirit, unlimited fusion of merits The exclusive magic weapon, the Supreme Infinity Cauldron, can be used to refine elixirs and refine weapons. It can be used to attack, defend, and absorb charm. It can also be used to increase the level with the strength of the male protagonist. The Zhen Clan's Kung Fu, the Universe and Creation Sutra, the Sun and Moon Promise Sutra, the Universe Steps, the Creation Fist, the God-killing Spear Technique, the Wuji Sword Technique, and the Ten Thousand Sword Techniques

这就是抖音上惨遭吐槽的智障霸道总裁文吧！虽然表面上不同但是实际上是换汤不换药智障的主题是不会变的，什么事都有路人甲在旁边科普报价，第一章就毒死人了，玫瑰花在高速行驶的汽车里，路人是怎么看清楚的，还精确报出了产地价值和数量**朵。

一天100花55张票子。一天就一更。

Everything you wrote is like this, can't you not give up the brain fruit?