It All Begins with Writing

I spent half my life charging money and found out that VIP still needs to be manually clicked*

Author, I'm not talking about you. I just read the first chapter and I want to complain about you. You actually use such good skills to write novels? Type? You don't know how to masturbate?

Chapter 2, after reading it briefly, it's okay if the author dies and the whole family is killed, pffff

I don't understand why the protagonist wrote a crappy novel but didn't let his woman know about it. Could this make others look down on him? Forcibly create contradictions?

It feels very poisonous to want to sing a song to someone you have only met once. Normally you would not have such an idea at all. There is no need to do this just to pick up a girl.

Longteng Novel Network?? The author is undoubtedly an experienced driver

What's going on with Deng Xiaoqi? Author, are you really not trying to rape someone? In the end, you still don't believe the protagonist and just break up. Why does a person who can't even trust you still hang around like a licker? This kind of thing happens a second time. Wang Yidi is much better than this Deng Xiaoqi.

I would like to make a suggestion, don't forgive Deng Xiaoqi too early. She showed affection to Wang Yidi on campus and made Deng Xiaoqi regret it. Then Deng Xiaoqi had a quarrel with her mother. Deng Xiaoqi's character is too soft and she needs to be given strong medicine.

The heroine Deng is really not good, she is too weak. What if the family breaks up again in the future? Not as good as this Dee

Don't tell me that book reviews are automatically refined?