Shizuka Hiratsuka: "I said Itsuka, you don't have any friends!"
Itsuka Shidao: "But I have many elves!"
Kasumigaoka Shiu: "Shido-kun, come on a date with me!"
Itsuka Shidao: "Sorry! I have a girlfriend, and there is no place for you, senior sister..."
Yinglili: "I heard that you are writing a novel. It's not impossible to ask me to draw illustrations for you..."
Itsuka Shidao: "No need! Erya can just help me draw it!"
Yukinoshita Yukino: "Cats are so cute!"
Itsuka Shidou: "I prefer *, especially those like origami."
Nakano Satsuki: "I... I'm very good at eating!"
Itsuka Shidao: "How about competing with Tohka?"
This novel and its characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.
Reader comments
After all, the theme is about disciples, and the plot of the main character is small and understandable. It's interesting to watch, and the beginning is good. Except for the beef noodles, the big brothers in the first test were all good, and a few of the ones described in the second test were also good. In the third test, I knew I was going to pull it off because of the large number of people. The first two generations had developed well, but the third generation started to fail, so Enero was good. The character Beef Noodles was quite likable at first, but as I progressed, I felt more and more that this character must be the author YY's own, paving the way for him to go crazy and getting all kinds of heaven-defying buffs, which became even more obvious after the Five Disasters. The reader thinks the protagonist is He, but in the author's mind it is actually beef noodles, because this represents the author himself. Moreover, the plot of this character is very fragmented. Although the author has set up a lot of opportunities for Beef Noodles, Beef Noodles has less and less sense of collective participation. The whole story is just one plot for everyone. Beef Noodles is separated into a treasure-hunting plot, and then he shows up in front of everyone, and then splits away.
I've watched half of it, and I personally feel that it's generally good. However, I feel that the protagonist's IQ is not very high, and sometimes he is both serious and serious at the same time. What we mean is that the character should not be inconsistent, and he should be very naive from beginning to end. Don't use the evil Asasi anymore.
With all due respect, the world of Journey to the West is deeper than the prehistoric times. The way of heaven is perfect. There is basically no civil war and peaceful development of the Six Saints in this period. The great forces in the sky and the world have stabilized. The so-called catastrophe in this period is just a puppet show controlled by the saints themselves.
Author, you have the ability to write a book and you have the ability to update it. Why do you want to fake it? It gave me hope, and it gave me despair, but I didn't shiver even to death?
I stopped by Shangxiang after two and a half years, and I can honestly say that the writing was really good.
I feel like I've fallen apart, and I've targeted Anlunyi too many times. I personally think it's enough for Guangzhou to announce that he likes the second dimension. There's really no need to trick him anymore. At least they don't have any ill will toward you. Really, one lesson is enough. If you teach him too much, he'll bully others. The protagonist's heart is twisted and dark towards men. I still say the same thing, people don't have any ill will toward you, but you do it again and again. Regarding the first time, it was okay to say that it was a flashpoint between the previous dissatisfaction with the TV show and the current dissatisfaction. But after that, I felt a little bit apologetic. I at least wrote something and said that I didn't bother to target him because he was so miserable. This way, I could restore the image of the protagonist. The prejudice in my heart was a big mountain. I have seen this sentence before, so I felt that the protagonist had been over it again and again, and the Taoist friend was obsessed with it! The image is ruined. Oh, thank you for the women themselves. It's enough to stay away from Anlunyi indirectly because they like the protagonist. There is no need to create any misunderstandings against him. It's annoying to watch the protagonist.
This protagonist makes people want to beat him up, he is even worse than An Yilun
We already have a system, and we still understand the plot through time travel, but we are still afraid of this and that, not being able to keep our wife, having to divorce early, and still following the plot, why don't you change your role as the protagonist again?
The protagonist yells and screams like a madman. Is the author from a low-traffic background? This is the essence of roaring. It's all about roaring to express feelings and be sexy.
It is now September 24, 2023. The author is still not resurrected. If he has the ability, he will jump out of the coffin as before.
After the exam (=^▽^=), I will continue to update from January 1st, and the title of the book is about eternity.
It's full of hypocrisy and pretentiousness, which is really off-putting.
When I saw Wuhe Shidou, I thought of Wuhe Shizhi. Am I hopeless?
Are there so many people talking about this book? It looks like you won't accept girls, so why don't you write about dating and daily life? Open a harem for the original male lead?
At first I thought the writing was quite good, but in the middle, I felt that the portrayal of some heroines in the anime lacked the original flavor, the plot became more and more biased towards Long Ao Tianwen, and the emotional line between Natsume and the heroine was also a bit far-fetched*. To be honest, I was a little disappointed, but I can still take a look at it. I hope the author can seriously restore the heroine's personality and character characteristics.
Of course, these are just some of my personal suggestions and opinions.
Three monthly passes and two thousand points are collected. You are finally updated. Tears came out.
After waiting for more than half a year to finally update a few pictures, why is it not updated again? ? ?
Are the dead now resurrected? I found that several books by former eunuchs have started to be updated again.
Let's not talk about settings first. You have made the male protagonist into a typical person who eats from the bowl and looks at what's in the pot. Isn't this a scumbag? There are more than 80 pictures and I want to create a white-haired woman, look at me and ** (the pure love warrior will give you a punch directly), what's the point of teasing if you don't marry!
Good luck, the author has updated
Oh my god, four updates a day? Author, have you been kidnapped?
This is the only novel I have purchased with all chapters
Annual update: The author's daily grave-sweeping routine
To be honest, this novel was smashed in the first few chapters. Forget it if you don't accept girls, you clearly won't have a relationship with anyone, but you end up taking care of Kasumigaoka, I just want to ask how can they have nothing to do with you? Isn't this trying to attract other people's attention? This protagonist is more poisonous than An Yilun.
Who can tell me if the author of the corpse scam is a ghostwriter?
The author has actually published a new book! If you are interested, just click on the author's name to take a look. It seems that the author often changes his name.
Innate treasures are all born innately. How can they be refined? And peacock feathers? Where did the peacock feathers come from when Yuan Feng didn't die?
I really don't want Shido to expand his harem any more
It has a bright future. This is one of the best-quality dating fics I've ever read. I'll help you promote it when I have time.
Does the author have any ambition to write about Rinmi Sonogami? I recently watched "Rinya Utopia" and "Rinsu Reincarnation", and I feel that Rinya is the most pitiful. Manyuri is still remembered, but Rinya has disappeared from everyone's memory. This is also a pity for the battle.
After all, the theme is about disciples, and the plot of the main character is small and understandable. It's interesting to watch, and the beginning is good. Except for the beef noodles, the big brothers in the first test were all good, and a few of the ones described in the second test were also good. In the third test, I knew I was going to pull it off because of the large number of people. The first two generations had developed well, but the third generation started to fail, so Enero was good. The character Beef Noodles was quite likable at first, but as I progressed, I felt more and more that this character must be the author YY's own, paving the way for him to go crazy and getting all kinds of heaven-defying buffs, which became even more obvious after the Five Disasters. The reader thinks the protagonist is He, but in the author's mind it is actually beef noodles, because this represents the author himself. Moreover, the plot of this character is very fragmented. Although the author has set up a lot of opportunities for Beef Noodles, Beef Noodles has less and less sense of collective participation. The whole story is just one plot for everyone. Beef Noodles is separated into a treasure-hunting plot, and then he shows up in front of everyone, and then splits away.
I've watched half of it, and I personally feel that it's generally good. However, I feel that the protagonist's IQ is not very high, and sometimes he is both serious and serious at the same time. What we mean is that the character should not be inconsistent, and he should be very naive from beginning to end. Don't use the evil Asasi anymore.
With all due respect, the world of Journey to the West is deeper than the prehistoric times. The way of heaven is perfect. There is basically no civil war and peaceful development of the Six Saints in this period. The great forces in the sky and the world have stabilized. The so-called catastrophe in this period is just a puppet show controlled by the saints themselves.
Author, you have the ability to write a book and you have the ability to update it. Why do you want to fake it? It gave me hope, and it gave me despair, but I didn't shiver even to death?
I stopped by Shangxiang after two and a half years, and I can honestly say that the writing was really good.
I feel like I've fallen apart, and I've targeted Anlunyi too many times. I personally think it's enough for Guangzhou to announce that he likes the second dimension. There's really no need to trick him anymore. At least they don't have any ill will toward you. Really, one lesson is enough. If you teach him too much, he'll bully others. The protagonist's heart is twisted and dark towards men. I still say the same thing, people don't have any ill will toward you, but you do it again and again. Regarding the first time, it was okay to say that it was a flashpoint between the previous dissatisfaction with the TV show and the current dissatisfaction. But after that, I felt a little bit apologetic. I at least wrote something and said that I didn't bother to target him because he was so miserable. This way, I could restore the image of the protagonist. The prejudice in my heart was a big mountain. I have seen this sentence before, so I felt that the protagonist had been over it again and again, and the Taoist friend was obsessed with it! The image is ruined. Oh, thank you for the women themselves. It's enough to stay away from Anlunyi indirectly because they like the protagonist. There is no need to create any misunderstandings against him. It's annoying to watch the protagonist.
This protagonist makes people want to beat him up, he is even worse than An Yilun
We already have a system, and we still understand the plot through time travel, but we are still afraid of this and that, not being able to keep our wife, having to divorce early, and still following the plot, why don't you change your role as the protagonist again?
The protagonist yells and screams like a madman. Is the author from a low-traffic background? This is the essence of roaring. It's all about roaring to express feelings and be sexy.
It is now September 24, 2023. The author is still not resurrected. If he has the ability, he will jump out of the coffin as before.
After the exam (=^▽^=), I will continue to update from January 1st, and the title of the book is about eternity.
It's full of hypocrisy and pretentiousness, which is really off-putting.
When I saw Wuhe Shidou, I thought of Wuhe Shizhi. Am I hopeless?
Are there so many people talking about this book? It looks like you won't accept girls, so why don't you write about dating and daily life? Open a harem for the original male lead?
At first I thought the writing was quite good, but in the middle, I felt that the portrayal of some heroines in the anime lacked the original flavor, the plot became more and more biased towards Long Ao Tianwen, and the emotional line between Natsume and the heroine was also a bit far-fetched*. To be honest, I was a little disappointed, but I can still take a look at it. I hope the author can seriously restore the heroine's personality and character characteristics. Of course, these are just some of my personal suggestions and opinions.
Three monthly passes and two thousand points are collected. You are finally updated. Tears came out.
After waiting for more than half a year to finally update a few pictures, why is it not updated again? ? ?
Are the dead now resurrected? I found that several books by former eunuchs have started to be updated again.
Let's not talk about settings first. You have made the male protagonist into a typical person who eats from the bowl and looks at what's in the pot. Isn't this a scumbag? There are more than 80 pictures and I want to create a white-haired woman, look at me and ** (the pure love warrior will give you a punch directly), what's the point of teasing if you don't marry!
Good luck, the author has updated
Oh my god, four updates a day? Author, have you been kidnapped?
This is the only novel I have purchased with all chapters
Annual update: The author's daily grave-sweeping routine
To be honest, this novel was smashed in the first few chapters. Forget it if you don't accept girls, you clearly won't have a relationship with anyone, but you end up taking care of Kasumigaoka, I just want to ask how can they have nothing to do with you? Isn't this trying to attract other people's attention? This protagonist is more poisonous than An Yilun.
Who can tell me if the author of the corpse scam is a ghostwriter?
The author has actually published a new book! If you are interested, just click on the author's name to take a look. It seems that the author often changes his name.
Innate treasures are all born innately. How can they be refined? And peacock feathers? Where did the peacock feathers come from when Yuan Feng didn't die?
I really don't want Shido to expand his harem any more
It has a bright future. This is one of the best-quality dating fics I've ever read. I'll help you promote it when I have time.
Does the author have any ambition to write about Rinmi Sonogami? I recently watched "Rinya Utopia" and "Rinsu Reincarnation", and I feel that Rinya is the most pitiful. Manyuri is still remembered, but Rinya has disappeared from everyone's memory. This is also a pity for the battle.