Doomsday: The Slave Overlord

It might be better to remove the rebirth, and change the background of the woman. In fact, your rebirth creates a butterfly effect. Will the strong person in the previous life still be the same in this life? Not necessarily

You only have more than ten chapters. Even if many people see it, they will choose to read it to gain weight. It's crazy if you don't insist on updating so that people can read it.

Regarding Bai Moqian's past life, I don't think there is any need to change it, just leave it as it is. Just don't mention it often in the future. Regarding the past life, you can only write down the usable first-hand information that the protagonist knows. After all, the previous life of the protagonist you set can only be regarded as a mid-level one, but other previous lives are so unreliable. If you bring it up from time to time, it will inevitably make people uncomfortable.

Update as soon as possible, I can't wait

I'm fascinated by it, I'll update it soon

Li Yan must be taken away

It's so cliche. After rebirth, you will definitely meet an awesome woman in your previous life. This is one of the clichés.