Shadow Covers the Sky

Next time when writing about pirates, please add the word "pirate" before the title of the book. Thank you.

I was able to write 520,000 words without anyone reading. I feel sad +1

You failed the review for Chapter 74.

It's best to change the name and add a pirate prefix, otherwise it won't even be found in the search! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Of pirates. . . . This is the title of the book. I didn't know it was about pirates even after reading the introduction.

Author, can you please write about the protagonist panel? I don't even know what he has. Made me very messy.

Author, can you continue to update the book "Auntie's Son"?

I would like to ask, the Momo fruit can only be increased a hundred times at most. Is there an upper limit? Shouldn't it depend on the people who develop and use it?

The Immortal Ten Thousand Shadows Scripture

Is Naruto planning to write something similar to **station?

I thought it was about covering the sky

I'm helpless. Roger hasn't become the Pirate King yet, and he's not dead yet. How did Garp become a naval hero? Alabasta is preparing to encircle and suppress the naval hero Garp written there.

I found that many One Piece fans ignore physical limitations. Even at the age of 10, they have three colors of domineering and are two meters tall before they have even begun to develop. . . If you are drunk and your body is not fully developed, learning domineering will be very harmful to your body. There is also the three-color domineering experience. It is so obvious to force the experience to be given away. I remember that the original Moonlight Moria is not domineering. Can you be more careful? In addition, the Sixth Form of Navy also requires a very strong physical foundation to practice. Think of a normal human being! 10 Years old! Practice this, and don't even think about developing anymore. No system would dare to write like this.

To be honest, your writing is too buggy, and the protagonist is not attractive at all. It is really boring to just have a fantasy novel that makes other people look stupid. I suggest you watch One Piece: The Arrival of the Thunder God to see how they wrote it.

If you didn't update, I would have thought you had gone to the palace to meet the saint.

When will 239 be unlocked?

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