When you have a funny auxiliary system, even if you are the protagonist, you can only bear it with gritted teeth when it comes to the system's misdeeds. Who can let others be your capital to show off!
But fortunately, he traveled to the world of the Heroic Company. Lu Ze thought about all the beauties who were kind and lively, innocent and cute, noble and elegant, cold-tempered, or charming and passionate!
System, send me a task quickly, I want to pick ten of them!
Perhaps everyone who has watched Xiongbinglian has a Xiongbinglian world of his own in his heart, and newcomer Xiao Mengxin is no exception. Many seniors have also written about Xiongbinglian. They want to show you their inner world of Xiongbinglian, and so do I.
The author believes that the most attractive thing in Xiongbing Company is the beautiful women with their own charms. They are self-respecting, strong and unyielding, willing to fight, and dare to take responsibility. No matter who they are, as long as they are young people and passionate young people, there will always be goddesses in their hearts. They are the...
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Reader comments
First of all, newcomers, my new book will definitely have a lot of things that may surprise you or make you dislike it. I hope all readers will take care of my face and give me more opinions. I will reply to them all and thank you.
Of course, if you insist on scolding me, I can't stop you. I do have a great fondness for angels, and I can't help but be a little eccentric. I beg your forgiveness!
The protagonist loses control at one moment and is seriously injured and comatose at another. When this happens, there is only one possibility, that is, the protagonist is a slave to power! Be controlled by power!
I don't want to watch it anymore. It's so frustrating and makes me angry.
The biggest bug is martial arts. I almost laughed when I saw you writing about Jiaoyan and Hexi Martial Arts. Not to mention Hexi, Yan is already ** years old. The whole sentence is unpleasant, she can be regarded as the ancestor of mankind, and she also teaches people Tai Chi. . . . Yan has been fighting with the devil for maybe ** years. If you say that her own fighting skills are not as good as the martial arts practiced by a boy who is less than 20 years old, brother, you are talking nonsense. Of course, you can completely explain it as she is taking care of the protagonist's face, deliberately. I feel that the protagonist is actually unable to be read. If he could be read, he might not even be able to compare to Ge Xiaolun. . . If you don't believe me, read your own writing.
When the protagonist and Keisha go to the Yiren planet, it can be said that they first concealed their fake death in order to investigate the truth, but what happens next? Wouldn't the protagonist feel heartbroken just because Hexi continued to stay in the City of Angels because He Xi gave him a not-so-important task? On Earth, Qilin Lingfeng was heartbroken for herself and went to pick up girls in the City of Angels. The protagonist described earlier loves them so deeply, but the protagonist here is described as so ruthless. Most readers of super gods come to read the emotional lines. Your plot is not well written, and you can't tell the priority.
I don't think the most attractive thing about Xiongbing Company is not the beautiful women, but the feelings of family and country in it, the passion to sacrifice one's life and blood for one's own planet and country, and the inspiration to grow from a small person to a warrior.
It's a bit green, the system has a male voice.
I was heartbroken when I saw Keisha died. I stopped watching it when I saw Liang Bing died.
I was born in China, but I yearn for the United States.
I finally left the land that raised me. I want to go to that free country.
I hope you will all remember my name when I go.
My name is:
Dongfeng strategic missile!!!
As a man, who doesn't want to have a harem, three wives and four concubines? (First of all, your novel must have a sense of logic, otherwise it will look twisted and brainless. I won't say it. Everyone knows it.) As for this one, I have only read four or five chapters, so I won't comment on it yet. Take a look and then talk.
A woman is so miserable that she rapes her
Is it the harem again? Can't you leave a wife for Ge Xiaolun, Zhao Xin and others?
I have never believed in the nonsense that with greater ability comes greater responsibility. The truth is that the greater the status, the greater the responsibility. If you get the rights and interests of this position, you will protect this status from being destroyed. With power, you have no rights and interests, just like a quality increase? Can you please stop being so hypocritical? Human nature is self-centered.
Don't say anything else. Let's get a bottle of vodka first. I'll fuck you as you like, tons, tons, tons, tons. . . Belch. . .
Doesn't the author have any standpoint when writing a book? It's okay to date everyone once and for all, the heroine is no different from a white chick, the emotional scenes are just like playing house, and she doesn't even understand the most basic human sophistication? There are also problems with the setting. The protagonist is given a so-called powerful desire, and the protagonist is completely written as a ** with no position, no bottom line, and no reason. Even if it is a first work, wouldn't the author review what he has written? ! Don't you care whether the quality of your work meets the requirements? ! Or do you just write it without even thinking about normal logic for the sake of word count, and don't even bother to review it after you finish it? ! If the author is a junior high school student, just pretend I didn't say it.
The protagonist's original world is more fantasy, to be honest. Basically every Super God book in Feilu can be linked to fantasy, which made me speechless. It is obviously about science and technology, so I think it is better to start a new book directly after the Super God is finished, such as Dou Po, Hua Jiang Hu, Qin Shi, Ling Cong... These Chinese comics are relatively popular and can be written.
After reading Chapter 11, I feel really depressed, frustrated and awkward! It's okay to like beauties, but going against your heart for beauties...! It's a bit holy motherly and pretentious! This is not a cool article!
Don't you know how to hide your origin recently? When others ask, you will say that you are from the original earth, for fear that others will not know that you are originally a **.
Author, please, please update it, brother, I kneel down for you.
**，这怕不是大道系统吧！就是天道系统，那也不用拜师菩提吧！圣人还在天道之下呢？
In Chapter 87, it was said that Rena is thousands of years old???
What kind of goddess you are, you are just greedy for other people's bodies, you are a bitch
Is the protagonist mentally retarded? And how old is the author? Junior high school student?
I haven't read it yet. I came here from Tieba. The author is a real tiger and he promotes it everywhere, haha. . . Whether you keep the rose or not, it depends on whether the Xiongbing Company feels sorry for her the most.
The writing is very good, but how many chapters will it be updated to?
Dialogue is stiff.
It feels like having an awkward chat
The first thing after time travel is not to understand the system, but to pick up girls, really! So poisonous.
Why did I feel the taste of licking when I only looked at a dozen of them?
Can the author explain this? Why are you playing martial arts in the world of technology again? This is so embarrassing.
It means you are still interacting frequently in the book review area. I know you are still there, otherwise I would have removed the book from the bookshelf.
Don't even think about the super seminary opening a harem of angels! Kesha teaches you how to be a good person
Come on, brother, I haven't been to school for a long time.
First of all, newcomers, my new book will definitely have a lot of things that may surprise you or make you dislike it. I hope all readers will take care of my face and give me more opinions. I will reply to them all and thank you. Of course, if you insist on scolding me, I can't stop you. I do have a great fondness for angels, and I can't help but be a little eccentric. I beg your forgiveness!
The protagonist loses control at one moment and is seriously injured and comatose at another. When this happens, there is only one possibility, that is, the protagonist is a slave to power! Be controlled by power!
I don't want to watch it anymore. It's so frustrating and makes me angry.
The biggest bug is martial arts. I almost laughed when I saw you writing about Jiaoyan and Hexi Martial Arts. Not to mention Hexi, Yan is already ** years old. The whole sentence is unpleasant, she can be regarded as the ancestor of mankind, and she also teaches people Tai Chi. . . . Yan has been fighting with the devil for maybe ** years. If you say that her own fighting skills are not as good as the martial arts practiced by a boy who is less than 20 years old, brother, you are talking nonsense. Of course, you can completely explain it as she is taking care of the protagonist's face, deliberately. I feel that the protagonist is actually unable to be read. If he could be read, he might not even be able to compare to Ge Xiaolun. . . If you don't believe me, read your own writing.
When the protagonist and Keisha go to the Yiren planet, it can be said that they first concealed their fake death in order to investigate the truth, but what happens next? Wouldn't the protagonist feel heartbroken just because Hexi continued to stay in the City of Angels because He Xi gave him a not-so-important task? On Earth, Qilin Lingfeng was heartbroken for herself and went to pick up girls in the City of Angels. The protagonist described earlier loves them so deeply, but the protagonist here is described as so ruthless. Most readers of super gods come to read the emotional lines. Your plot is not well written, and you can't tell the priority.
I don't think the most attractive thing about Xiongbing Company is not the beautiful women, but the feelings of family and country in it, the passion to sacrifice one's life and blood for one's own planet and country, and the inspiration to grow from a small person to a warrior.
It's a bit green, the system has a male voice.
I was heartbroken when I saw Keisha died. I stopped watching it when I saw Liang Bing died.
I was born in China, but I yearn for the United States. I finally left the land that raised me. I want to go to that free country. I hope you will all remember my name when I go. My name is: Dongfeng strategic missile!!!
As a man, who doesn't want to have a harem, three wives and four concubines? (First of all, your novel must have a sense of logic, otherwise it will look twisted and brainless. I won't say it. Everyone knows it.) As for this one, I have only read four or five chapters, so I won't comment on it yet. Take a look and then talk.
A woman is so miserable that she rapes her
Is it the harem again? Can't you leave a wife for Ge Xiaolun, Zhao Xin and others?
I have never believed in the nonsense that with greater ability comes greater responsibility. The truth is that the greater the status, the greater the responsibility. If you get the rights and interests of this position, you will protect this status from being destroyed. With power, you have no rights and interests, just like a quality increase? Can you please stop being so hypocritical? Human nature is self-centered.
Don't say anything else. Let's get a bottle of vodka first. I'll fuck you as you like, tons, tons, tons, tons. . . Belch. . .
Doesn't the author have any standpoint when writing a book? It's okay to date everyone once and for all, the heroine is no different from a white chick, the emotional scenes are just like playing house, and she doesn't even understand the most basic human sophistication? There are also problems with the setting. The protagonist is given a so-called powerful desire, and the protagonist is completely written as a ** with no position, no bottom line, and no reason. Even if it is a first work, wouldn't the author review what he has written? ! Don't you care whether the quality of your work meets the requirements? ! Or do you just write it without even thinking about normal logic for the sake of word count, and don't even bother to review it after you finish it? ! If the author is a junior high school student, just pretend I didn't say it.
The protagonist's original world is more fantasy, to be honest. Basically every Super God book in Feilu can be linked to fantasy, which made me speechless. It is obviously about science and technology, so I think it is better to start a new book directly after the Super God is finished, such as Dou Po, Hua Jiang Hu, Qin Shi, Ling Cong... These Chinese comics are relatively popular and can be written.
After reading Chapter 11, I feel really depressed, frustrated and awkward! It's okay to like beauties, but going against your heart for beauties...! It's a bit holy motherly and pretentious! This is not a cool article!
Don't you know how to hide your origin recently? When others ask, you will say that you are from the original earth, for fear that others will not know that you are originally a **.
Author, please, please update it, brother, I kneel down for you.
**，这怕不是大道系统吧！就是天道系统，那也不用拜师菩提吧！圣人还在天道之下呢？
In Chapter 87, it was said that Rena is thousands of years old???
What kind of goddess you are, you are just greedy for other people's bodies, you are a bitch
Is the protagonist mentally retarded? And how old is the author? Junior high school student?
I haven't read it yet. I came here from Tieba. The author is a real tiger and he promotes it everywhere, haha. . . Whether you keep the rose or not, it depends on whether the Xiongbing Company feels sorry for her the most.
The writing is very good, but how many chapters will it be updated to?
Dialogue is stiff. It feels like having an awkward chat The first thing after time travel is not to understand the system, but to pick up girls, really! So poisonous. Why did I feel the taste of licking when I only looked at a dozen of them? Can the author explain this? Why are you playing martial arts in the world of technology again? This is so embarrassing.
It means you are still interacting frequently in the book review area. I know you are still there, otherwise I would have removed the book from the bookshelf.
Don't even think about the super seminary opening a harem of angels! Kesha teaches you how to be a good person
Come on, brother, I haven't been to school for a long time.
I've been watching you secretly. (Funny)