"Here is..."
"The Battle of New York?"
"I traveled to the Marvel Universe?"
The next second.
The sound of the system came to Louis' mind.
"Congratulations to the host, you have received the Edward Newgate ability experience card from the pirate world!"
This novel and its characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.
Reader comments
I didn't want to read it after the opening scene. Just write a comic with an urban slap-in-the-face plot. People don't want to take advantage of you, but they shamelessly come up to you. It's really too much.
It's poisonous at the beginning. The protagonist has said that he has not inherited Whitebeard's physique, so where does he have the capital to use air shock blindly? The protagonist will die after using it once.
Another protagonist who licks the United States whenever he can. From this point of view, this is actually the author's idea. Is the author preparing to immigrate?
Is the protagonist another traitor working for S. H. I. E. L. D.? If so, stop watching it!
Without a white beard, you would die with one punch. Without a strong body, how can you withstand the recoil?
This author 100% used to write fantasy upgrade novels. When I read the table of contents, I was hit hard. When he writes about beauties such as Natasha Hill, she must have red lips and beautiful eyes. When he writes about the shock of passers-by, he must be so horrifying. How can one person be as powerful as the Avengers? It makes my scalp numb.
I actually persisted for 26 chapters, and I'm just asking you if I'm a fan or not.
Why don't you join SHIELD with your sister and go play on your own? . . . **Arts
After reading the introduction, I couldn't help but want to leave a comment. Is this book about a Japanese comic character rubbing an American comic character on the ground, hahahaha
Your word count ability is really not that great.
Without Whitebeard's physique, it is impossible to control the Shock Fruit. The stronger the physical strength, the greater the power. Chapter 6: How can a body that has not inherited that perverted body use the fruit's ability?
You really know how to put together chapters, what a good Marvel, what kind of thing did you write, the more you write, the more biased you are, who are you going to show it to! Can I use some snacks? Is it really okay to just make up the numbers? Unlocked!
I've only read the first two chapters. I don't know if the author felt embarrassed when he wrote this, but I'm so embarrassed after reading two chapters that I'm about to get cancer.
Then I couldn't read anymore. What was Shapi's nickname in front of him, the Four Emperors? I'm drunk.
Mmp paid to listen to your word count to show off, Shabi
The shady woods you long for will be covered with white dew in the morning and late at night - Shakespeare
When you can easily enter, you should understand that it is not that you are great, but that the other party can tolerate your insignificance. ——Paul Korchagin
What you think of as a tree-lined alley is actually already busy with traffic. Shakespeare
Even though countless people have left traces of that place, we still yearn for it - Guo Moruo
Tao Yuanming suddenly became enlightened after a few dozen attempts.
A universal capsule contains more than ten chapters. It is too watery and I have no desire to read further.
Too much nonsense, very questionable character, scumbag
The energy of the earthquake is too dramatic, it makes my scalp numb with embarrassment.
Is this a story about Japanese comics fighting American comics?
How come it's a business article just by looking at it (?￣▽￣)?
Have you ever seen this name? Those who have studied physics are inexplicably nervous. The so-called earthquake is just a phenomenon caused by vibration. It is embarrassing to call it earthquake energy.
I was overcome with embarrassment. One second I was talking about wealth being indispensable, and the next second I was talking about converting all my rewards into vibranium. Should I wholesale it or sell it?
The subject matter is good, but the water is too strong
There are too many typos, and the white beard of Zhenzhen Fruit will be interpreted as Earthquake Man. Send a few words to the author, haha
The amazing thing about the world of online literature is that any style, any world, can be written in a pretentious way.
The procrastination was so great that I wrote more than n chapters to write a protagonist who is so awesome.
I read more than a dozen chapters, **. The most **** point: Braised Dantou didn't investigate the protagonist's background at all, and just shouted for him to join S. H. I. E. L. D. He doesn't even know who the protagonist is, or if he is even a human being! In addition, the live battle can only be seen by SHIELD and the common people. For example, Hydra has no description at all. Although this is unnecessary, you even write about unrelated common people. . . The intelligence and logical thinking of other superheroes are suppressed. In order to highlight the protagonist's pretentiousness, the writing is overdone and makes it uncomfortable to watch.
Is the author that low-level? Vibration ability is just vibration ability. If I call it earthquake ability, it feels very low. Earthquake is just one type.
Originally, I rarely leave comments, but when I saw some chapters of Universal Capsule, I just couldn't stand it. It's too watery, even a fool can figure it out and make up the word count.
I didn't want to read it after the opening scene. Just write a comic with an urban slap-in-the-face plot. People don't want to take advantage of you, but they shamelessly come up to you. It's really too much.
It's poisonous at the beginning. The protagonist has said that he has not inherited Whitebeard's physique, so where does he have the capital to use air shock blindly? The protagonist will die after using it once.
Another protagonist who licks the United States whenever he can. From this point of view, this is actually the author's idea. Is the author preparing to immigrate?
Is the protagonist another traitor working for S. H. I. E. L. D.? If so, stop watching it!
Without a white beard, you would die with one punch. Without a strong body, how can you withstand the recoil?
This author 100% used to write fantasy upgrade novels. When I read the table of contents, I was hit hard. When he writes about beauties such as Natasha Hill, she must have red lips and beautiful eyes. When he writes about the shock of passers-by, he must be so horrifying. How can one person be as powerful as the Avengers? It makes my scalp numb.
I actually persisted for 26 chapters, and I'm just asking you if I'm a fan or not.
Why don't you join SHIELD with your sister and go play on your own? . . . **Arts
After reading the introduction, I couldn't help but want to leave a comment. Is this book about a Japanese comic character rubbing an American comic character on the ground, hahahaha
Your word count ability is really not that great.
Without Whitebeard's physique, it is impossible to control the Shock Fruit. The stronger the physical strength, the greater the power. Chapter 6: How can a body that has not inherited that perverted body use the fruit's ability?
You really know how to put together chapters, what a good Marvel, what kind of thing did you write, the more you write, the more biased you are, who are you going to show it to! Can I use some snacks? Is it really okay to just make up the numbers? Unlocked!
I've only read the first two chapters. I don't know if the author felt embarrassed when he wrote this, but I'm so embarrassed after reading two chapters that I'm about to get cancer.
Then I couldn't read anymore. What was Shapi's nickname in front of him, the Four Emperors? I'm drunk.
Mmp paid to listen to your word count to show off, Shabi
The shady woods you long for will be covered with white dew in the morning and late at night - Shakespeare When you can easily enter, you should understand that it is not that you are great, but that the other party can tolerate your insignificance. ——Paul Korchagin What you think of as a tree-lined alley is actually already busy with traffic. Shakespeare Even though countless people have left traces of that place, we still yearn for it - Guo Moruo Tao Yuanming suddenly became enlightened after a few dozen attempts.
A universal capsule contains more than ten chapters. It is too watery and I have no desire to read further.
Too much nonsense, very questionable character, scumbag
The energy of the earthquake is too dramatic, it makes my scalp numb with embarrassment.
Is this a story about Japanese comics fighting American comics?
How come it's a business article just by looking at it (?￣▽￣)?
Have you ever seen this name? Those who have studied physics are inexplicably nervous. The so-called earthquake is just a phenomenon caused by vibration. It is embarrassing to call it earthquake energy.
I was overcome with embarrassment. One second I was talking about wealth being indispensable, and the next second I was talking about converting all my rewards into vibranium. Should I wholesale it or sell it?
The subject matter is good, but the water is too strong
There are too many typos, and the white beard of Zhenzhen Fruit will be interpreted as Earthquake Man. Send a few words to the author, haha
The amazing thing about the world of online literature is that any style, any world, can be written in a pretentious way.
The procrastination was so great that I wrote more than n chapters to write a protagonist who is so awesome.
I read more than a dozen chapters, **. The most **** point: Braised Dantou didn't investigate the protagonist's background at all, and just shouted for him to join S. H. I. E. L. D. He doesn't even know who the protagonist is, or if he is even a human being! In addition, the live battle can only be seen by SHIELD and the common people. For example, Hydra has no description at all. Although this is unnecessary, you even write about unrelated common people. . . The intelligence and logical thinking of other superheroes are suppressed. In order to highlight the protagonist's pretentiousness, the writing is overdone and makes it uncomfortable to watch.
Is the author that low-level? Vibration ability is just vibration ability. If I call it earthquake ability, it feels very low. Earthquake is just one type.
Originally, I rarely leave comments, but when I saw some chapters of Universal Capsule, I just couldn't stand it. It's too watery, even a fool can figure it out and make up the word count.