
Naruto: the Whirlpool Orphan Who Emerged from Mt. Myouki
火影:妙木山走出的漩涡遗孤
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- 3.3M Words
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- Fanfiction
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- Anime Fanfiction
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- For men
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- 4y ago
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Let me talk about one more thing here, which is the "Esdeath" template. Is your ability "Esdeath" or just "the essence of devil". You must know that Esdeath only relied on physical skills and swordsmanship to become the general of the empire, and then drank the "Devil's Essence". Your "Esdeath" template only has "Devil's Essence", and Esdeath's physical skills and swordsmanship are completely absent! In this case, you might as well just give the protagonist a "Devil's Essence"
You said he is only at the level of the Shichibukai among pirates? The size of Madara's Tenzin Zhenxing is several times that of Fujitora's. The complete Susanoo is about the same size as Kaido Shenron. Of course, Kaido Shenlong has grown a lot, and there is also a questing jade that can guard against Hamon Kai's Xi Xiang. You must know that Hamon Kai's Xi Xiang has already He can use brute force to distort space, and there are also wheel graves... Let's not talk about Madara, but let's talk about Kisame. In the battle between Kisame and Kirabi, his water escape range has almost caught up with the explosion range of Ace's Entei. Not to mention high-end combat power, Six Paths Sage The battle between Ren and Kaguya has devastated the entire ninja world. Don't think that Konoha in the ninja world may be bigger than Malinfan. He usually doesn't show it. Just watch the clip of Ma using the big spiral wheel in the theater. You will know it. There are also The Ginrin Reincarnation Blast Neck equals the country's Ginrin Reincarnation Blast Moon Toneri, so the combat power of the Naruto world is better than that of the Pirates, and in the Naruto world, the protagonist who is a six-path strong man comes to the Pirates and you call him the Shichibukai, I think it's a bit poisonous.
Hope not to have a harem, and hope to leave Konoha
Who can tell me if there is a bitch like Haruno Sakura in the harem? If so, I won't watch it
Don't be so naughty about selling your harem after reading the introduction.
Five-year-old Chaokage still can't beat Jiraiya?
It means the three people that Hokage hates the most, the first is Shisui, the second is Itachi, and the third is Naruto.
Danzo: Come and join Konoha. We need talents like you.
I don't understand why people who write about Naruto all join Konoha and lick Konoha. This is a stroke of luck from a systematic person*
Poisonous, the orphan of the Kingdom of Whirlpool, what a good container!
Suddenly I remembered, what should I do with Che Huiyi? I remember that in the novel, after the reboot, the two of them had a child.
Why is Nakai's LV30 value around 90, and the protagonist is over 100?
Anyone who has watched Naruto knows what Naruto eats, right? I feel good.
To be honest, you, the original author of Naruto, don't fully understand what you're writing as a fanfic. You just write a variety of comics and cool stories, and it's better to recruit girls from all over the world than you, a forced fanfic.
How did you do it, brother, with two books of more than 30 million words? ? ? ? ? Awesome! ! !
You're so stupid, you can't even read some parts of it. What happened to Naruto? The ending wasn't even written.
Good guy, you, this big old toad, really fucked me so hard that it was so embarrassing.
I can only say that the writing style is excellent and the content is resonant and thought-provoking. It is one of the rare good books I have encountered in more than ten years. My only regret is that I have not read a word, but this does not affect my nonsense here.
Uchiha genocide is Sasuke's second year It was Shisui's death that strengthened his determination to exterminate the clan. Three years after Shisui's death, the Uchiha Itachi clan was wiped out. Entering first grade at the age of six. Seven years old in second grade. So Shisui died when Sasuke was 4 years old The protagonist and Sasuke are the same age, so the timeline is confusing
I can only say that the writing style is excellent and the content is resonant and thought-provoking. It is one of the rare good books I have encountered in more than ten years. My only regret is that I have not read a word, but this does not affect my nonsense here.
We start with six updates every day. I coded a bit too much, so there may be errors. Please point them out. If you have any suggestions or good ideas about ice attribute abilities, you can tell me. I will read them. Please continue reading The sixth update is about two chapters around four in the morning, two chapters in the afternoon, and two chapters in the evening, uninterrupted every day. Please read it, don't keep books, or give me a custom order, thank you all
It's totally not enough. How can I show you how many people there are?
First of all, you grew up in Mt. Myoboku. You are not used to eating bugs, but you still want to eat meat and vegetables? Don't others doubt this? Secondly, where does the golden light of the cloak come from in immortal mode? Isn't that the Nine-Tails chakra mode? Otsutsuki Toneri's chakra mode doesn't exist either. As for Boruto, forget it! As for Shisui opening Susanoo with one eye, this is the plot of the game, but it is said to be Kishimoto's instruction and I won't comment! In the end, all you got was the essence of the devil, instead of being able to defeat Danzo with 35% of Esdeath's total power? Can you please stop making trouble?
Chapter 5 got me there
It's ice escape, not ice shield.
I was so excited when I saw that Jiraiya was only 30 years old in the 53rd year of Konoha. If Minato Namikaze hadn't died, he would have been 29 by now!
Um, why don't you keep this Uchiha Spring? ?
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