I Am Zhao Zilong of Changshan

Liu Guan and Zhang would never call Gongsun Zan lord, otherwise Liu Bei would be a domestic slave with so many people. Liu's excuse was to help others and not call them lord!

By the way, I have a good suggestion for you. You can try to add the storyteller's expression. Several of the books I have read are quite popular and have good results, but I feel that it should not be easy. After all, storytelling is all about words. If it is well said, it will make people want to listen. If it is not well said, it will be boring, so this suggestion still has to be self-guided. The other one is the most practical. The advice I use is that the plot should have ups and downs or be suppressed first and then expanded. Of course, if you have an outline, you can also consider a better foreshadowing. In fact, the audience is like this. You have to have a way to whet their appetite. You can't put too many exciting points at once and the audience's expectations will become higher and higher. It doesn't matter if you cut this book. If you want to take this path in the future, my suggestions above are still good.