The Walking Dead: the Apocalyptic Hero

1. 30% Of this novel is about advancing the plot, and all that is left is descriptive. It is understandable that the apocalyptic theme cannot be separated from this aspect, but do you have dick cancer? People only mention a few words when the plot reaches a certain level. You write every chapter and describe it in detail. It can almost be said that this is a yellow little book with a doomsday shell. 2. If you don't break the chapter, don't mess around. Write it step by step and no one will laugh at you. If you don't have to pretend to be a big ass, reading a novel is like reading a ledger. Your brain is too big. 3. There are a lot of typos and a lot of confusing character names. After reading a chapter, you have to spend time figuring out which of the confused characters is which. 4. From time to time, chapters of other novels are mixed in. Are you starting to ask for it on your knees when you can't make money? Shameless, right? To sum up, you piece of shit, you are scolding you because I spent money, so kneel down and listen to me! !

If it weren't for the emotional appeal of The Walking Dead, this book would be a piece of shit!

Bala and Wanxika were written to death by you twice before, and then they appeared again. Sasha and Telsi, who had joined camp earlier, then wrote again. Don't you remember anything you wrote? At this level, you still shout every day that no one will read your book. Isn't it right that no one will read it?

It's very interesting and I'm planning to write this fanfic, The Walking Dead's exchange mall system, which can be exchanged for food, game weapons, hero weapons, game characters, armies, construction vehicles, etc.

There's no way Moore would have sex with Lori

It can be seen from the American TV series that Moore is still a conscientious person, and he still has a hint of kindness. I think he might be disdainful if he was asked to have sex with Rick's wife, and he would not do that.

What's the point of killing Rosita? You make me stupid. Because you fall in love with the male protagonist and are afraid of affecting the relationship within the team. Then you have to kill too many people. Just kill them all. Rick can't live, and Loli can't live. How many people will die at the hands of the protagonist. How did you come up with this stupid trick?

Or: How was the Hulk made?

I just read Chapter 6, and the author said that the results were too bad, so I had to just leave the update as it happened, and I was confused. Why are the results so bad? Don't you have any idea? ! There are a lot of typos, the sentences don't make sense, you didn't write at all, and you still want to get good grades? !

Chapter 246, I don't want to read it, typos, confusing chapters, occasionally a chapter pops up and I don't know what it is about. Also, can the author stop talking? The first few chapters are simply torture. If you don't like this subject, few people can insist on reading the paid chapters. Your writing is so natural If someone reads it, don't show off every chapter. Is there anyone who reads it? I'm going to release it. Is it really true that no one reads it? You have a bad mentality, and don't mess with the reader's mentality. If you don't pay, I'll pretend I didn't see it. You're still showing off at the front of every chapter for the paid chapters. No one is really pampering you. Let's leave the meeting!

There are too many women, 3 to 4 is enough. In a troubled world, the people in the team will definitely have opinions, and it will be boring to watch.

This author is suitable for writing island love action stories... Is this an apocalyptic story or a love action story? ? Throughout the whole article, it's either kiss or leave... What data do people give you? ? ?

Wow, why on earth did I spend money to read this crappy novel? It's heartbreaking. Food and medicine are important, but shouldn't the more important thing be the ability to continue to obtain these things? Medicines and food have a shelf life. Instead of trying to find ways to collect the population, recover factories and land with industrial capacity, etc., Instead, they desperately collect things that don't know whether they are still within the shelf life. The author is afraid that he is seriously ill.

After reading the first few chapters, I saw that the author said that he would blow himself up and give up. How could others read it...

Is it ghostwritten? Characters who have died always creep in. I spent almost 100 in 2 days and I really regret it.

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I feel that the biggest failure of this book is that it forcibly introduces the power of faith. To put it bluntly, it is a magic stick, like Ma Baoguo. He feels that he has returned, but his self-hypnosis is not enough.

The author himself has entered the palace! Now he is my little father-in-law!

Why does the supernatural plot appear here?

What a waste of my time. The male protagonist has a harem in addition to having a harem, and the characters in the original show are written as if they have meningitis. Moore would probably rather like Carol than a woman like Molly, or even disdain him. Rick is written as very incompetent, and other characters are weakened to express the bravery of the male protagonist. How about a harem? What are you doing, author?

I suspect that the author just skipped watching The Walking Dead and didn't watch it properly at all. The timeline is seriously messed up! And Rick was blackmailed by the author! The personalities of many important characters have changed beyond recognition! I saw Chapter 400. First of all, the Governor is a decisive person, and the camp is also a plunder camp. It is impossible for Rick and many others to go to the Governor's camp to live in peace! To be honest, I don't want to waste money, but there are basically no fan stories about The Walking Dead.

There is an entire chapter in the paid chapter that is not part of this novel? Isn't this already a water word count?

It's too petty. Normally speaking, the protagonist should develop towards the scale of the Federation. What's the point of fighting in a small way like the original Rick? What to do when the Salvation Army comes? Do you expect Eugene to turn the tide? And he actually dislikes the fact that there are too many people. I really don't understand. If there are more people, just take more space. How many people have died now? If you don't expand, you think there are too many people.

It is recommended to start with The Walking Dead.

I feel sorry for the tens of dollars. The first two or three hundred chapters are okay, but the later chapters are as uncomfortable as eating history. There are so many typos, some characters are dead, and they are brought back to life, and some characters have already joined the team, and they are joining again, awesome. It also adds a bunch of settings that weren't there originally, Loli has become a bus, and there are a bunch of characters from YY. . All I can say is that I was a victim of a browser scam.

Five chapters and two chapters are pornographic. Is it about The Walking Dead or Sex? The original version of The Walking Dead doesn't have as much pornography as you do, right?

What the hell are 26? Other novels have been inserted

I just like this kind of harem. This is the reality. Come on, author.

Chapter 175 is still on the farm and I still ask why netizens commented on water Really amused

Author, I still think it's better for the protagonist to find a fixed base, instead of just staying in one place for a while and then having the base destroyed.