Naruto: Logging In Early
火影之提前登录
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 37k Words
- Subgenre
- Urban High Society
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
33Chapters
2.5MReads
100Flowers
9.9Score
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Reader comments 6
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Even if you don't divide it into paragraphs, you still have to use " " to describe the characters.
Oh my god, there are no segments. First person. The protagonist is female. I can't afford to offend **!
Commentary on Chapter 1: Early Login (1) of "Hokage: Early Login" written by i1242975483.
Break it into paragraphs and change it to third person, otherwise no one will read it.
The segmentation is simply cruel. It's so dense that it gives me a headache. It's still in the first person. Farewell.
What the hell, I didn't understand a word of it