Love Apartment: Life of a Couch Potato

I suspect that I am mentally retarded.

Is it written by a human? Even if I sprinkle a handful of millet chicken on the keyboard, I can write better than the author.

Can we do better with segmentation or something?

Can you please put the punctuation marks? The pronouns are also messed up.

Segmentation, can you understand what people are called? It gives me a headache.

I watched two of them and my head hurt.

Speechless, the author is not criticizing you, you are really not suitable for writing novels... I finished a chapter before I finished it... You, the author, are also talented.

It's too obvious to copy Love Apartment: The World of Friends. The main character's name will appear (Liu Yuxi), and the plots are similar. You can learn from it, but you have to write something new. . . . .

It's too hard to read this book without punctuation. You also have to analyze who said the words.

What a mess, my head hurts from reading the first chapter, I don't even know what to write