I Am the Sage of Myriad Worlds!

I would like to make a small suggestion. You can write more rigorously about your practice. Your previous practice was all based on pills, which did not reflect the awesomeness of your practice. Moreover, he drank too many pills, dozens of bottles at a time, which did not reflect the level of a god-level alchemist.

For the author, when writing about Anti-inflammatory and Yaochen, I feel that their sinful nature was not written out. In the fight, why did the eldest lady of the ancient tribe like him? Being young and ignorant is one thing, and valuing one's own innocence is another. In addition, plus the calculation of Anti-inflammatory, it is really crazy. I don't understand why some guys say that the author is evil about Anti-inflammatory and Yaochen. Is it because you are that kind of person or something?

Fascinated by Yafei? In Xun'er's eyes, you are a person who surpasses Dou Di, and you can still be fascinated by women.

Fighting spirit turns into a horse, so terrifying

Let's do an idiom solitaire, I'll go first! The artillery fire continued,

The writing is good, but is it really okay to make the protagonist and Yao Lao so dark?

I agree with the author's understanding that those two are just scum, more or less. If it weren't for the protagonist, he would have died long ago

Looking at the introduction, does it mean that all of these female disciples were taken into the harem by the protagonist in the end?

I have read a similar book before. It takes more than a hundred chapters to change the world. Your book is pretty good!

The author criticizes well, I support you.