When Lin Dong woke up, he was shocked to find himself traveling through a parallel city.
And the new identity turned out to be that of the former No. 1 Brother of Deyun Club who was banned due to his impulsiveness when he was young and disputes with others.
When the time traveled, the ban time had passed. Just when he was numb, a singing disciple had an accident, and he was personally ordered by Teacher Yu to come to the stage to save him.
After taking the stage, he caused a huge sensation with his song "Tanqingshuihe" which had not yet been created in this world.
Lin Dong's dominance begins from this moment! ! !
This novel and its characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.
Reader comments
When I read the first chapter, I felt something was wrong. It felt like it was written purely for self-pleasure. Mistakes as simple as incorrect punctuation marks are common.
Really don't write about Pangu's blood essence and blood. I don't even think it's worth it for Pangu. One drop of blood essence can create a peak quasi-sage, and 12 drops can directly summon Pangu's true body. Look at what you wrote, ten drops of blood essence and blood have no effect. And if you put Pangu's blood essence and blood in front of you, a Taiyi can refine it? Get some hair. What the hell did you write about the essence and blood of the Dao Demon God?
Would practitioners mess around with mortals? Wouldn't it be better to just destroy the country?
Who is Jiang Si? Why does this name keep appearing in these recent photos? Did you change the main character's name? ? ?
I have read several books about cross talk, are they all sick? If the protagonist believes everything he says on stage, does he treat others as mentally retarded? !
The strengthening panel is for one constitution, and the strengthening is for strengthening the whole body at once, right? You strengthen this and that, but you don't feel anything at all. It's so messy. Well written and just fascinating to read
I discovered something, the names of some characters are very interesting to read backwards, for example: Yang Haotian (天天日 杨)
Author, it's okay not to accept it, but don't give it away, okay?
As mentioned, after reading 14 chapters, the protagonist only appears in a few chapters, and these chapters are all written in large quantities. The remaining ten or so chapters are all comments in the live broadcast room and guest seats. Haha, I am too lazy to read later. It is true that Feilu has all the best. Brothers, this is the best I have ever seen!
The writing is okay, and it's quite comfortable to look at. I also saw the photo of Ting Lei. In summary, there are two bad points.
1: I'm going to become a disciple. I forgot the specific one. Anyway, it's the early stage of Ultimate.
2: The part about the collaboration between Crescent Hotel and Mrs. Huo felt very frustrating. I kept being led by the nose. I felt that the book by Wu Xie, who was frightened at the beginning, wrote this part very well. I read these two books together. Both of them are worth it.
If you pretend to be a slap in the face, you will definitely fall into the street.
In the early stages of foundation building, the moon was cut. That's awesome.
Even if he comes out, he won't be able to last long, and he won't be very powerful. Duan Kong's brother, Byakuya, doesn't have much space when he comes out.
Did you promise to update immediately?
The protagonist should be renamed Lin Yundong
Don't pretend to be a slap in the face when writing a cross talk, it's too awkward and outdated.
All of this author's books are eunuchs.
I've already given a reward and I promised to add more updates?
There hasn't been any updates in two days, right?
This plot is written, do you think we are fools?
You, he was Deyun's first brother three years ago, but he doesn't have the P skill three years later. How did he get Deyun's first brother three years ago? And that ventriloquism can only be enhanced!
About Jiang Mucha's book "Starting to Dominate from the First Crosstalk Brother" Chapter 33: Fire and Water Are Incompatible? [Kneel down and beg for flowers and give evaluation votes] Chapter comments.
Commentary on Chapter 189 of the Killing Plan in "Martial Arts: Binding the Evil System at the Beginning" written by Zhutian 13.
What happened to cross talk recently?
You are the first of all novels written about life to be sold at a high price.
Regarding the book "Star Railroad: Starting Command Simulator" written by "Determined not to sell out"! Chapter 38 Two New Members Chapter Commentary.
The protagonist's name is Lin Dong? Isn't there the word "cloud" in the middle? Isn't he senior?
About Chapter 90 of Jiang Mucha's book "Starting from the First Crosstalk Brother to Dominate": What can't be discussed? [Please subscribe automatically! Please provide chapter reviews.
Commentary on Chapter 153: Pepe is Angry, written by Jiang Mucha in "Starting to Dominate from the First Crosstalk Brother".
Chapter 122 of "Siheyuan: Destroy My Marriage, You Don't Want to Provide for Old Age" written about dreaming in the dream, begged Qin Jingru, but was rejected miserably! Chapter review.
When I read the first chapter, I felt something was wrong. It felt like it was written purely for self-pleasure. Mistakes as simple as incorrect punctuation marks are common.
Really don't write about Pangu's blood essence and blood. I don't even think it's worth it for Pangu. One drop of blood essence can create a peak quasi-sage, and 12 drops can directly summon Pangu's true body. Look at what you wrote, ten drops of blood essence and blood have no effect. And if you put Pangu's blood essence and blood in front of you, a Taiyi can refine it? Get some hair. What the hell did you write about the essence and blood of the Dao Demon God?
Would practitioners mess around with mortals? Wouldn't it be better to just destroy the country?
Who is Jiang Si? Why does this name keep appearing in these recent photos? Did you change the main character's name? ? ?
I have read several books about cross talk, are they all sick? If the protagonist believes everything he says on stage, does he treat others as mentally retarded? !
The strengthening panel is for one constitution, and the strengthening is for strengthening the whole body at once, right? You strengthen this and that, but you don't feel anything at all. It's so messy. Well written and just fascinating to read
I discovered something, the names of some characters are very interesting to read backwards, for example: Yang Haotian (天天日 杨)
Author, it's okay not to accept it, but don't give it away, okay?
As mentioned, after reading 14 chapters, the protagonist only appears in a few chapters, and these chapters are all written in large quantities. The remaining ten or so chapters are all comments in the live broadcast room and guest seats. Haha, I am too lazy to read later. It is true that Feilu has all the best. Brothers, this is the best I have ever seen!
The writing is okay, and it's quite comfortable to look at. I also saw the photo of Ting Lei. In summary, there are two bad points. 1: I'm going to become a disciple. I forgot the specific one. Anyway, it's the early stage of Ultimate. 2: The part about the collaboration between Crescent Hotel and Mrs. Huo felt very frustrating. I kept being led by the nose. I felt that the book by Wu Xie, who was frightened at the beginning, wrote this part very well. I read these two books together. Both of them are worth it.
If you pretend to be a slap in the face, you will definitely fall into the street.
In the early stages of foundation building, the moon was cut. That's awesome.
Even if he comes out, he won't be able to last long, and he won't be very powerful. Duan Kong's brother, Byakuya, doesn't have much space when he comes out.
Did you promise to update immediately?
The protagonist should be renamed Lin Yundong
Don't pretend to be a slap in the face when writing a cross talk, it's too awkward and outdated.
All of this author's books are eunuchs.
I've already given a reward and I promised to add more updates?
There hasn't been any updates in two days, right?
This plot is written, do you think we are fools?
You, he was Deyun's first brother three years ago, but he doesn't have the P skill three years later. How did he get Deyun's first brother three years ago? And that ventriloquism can only be enhanced!
About Jiang Mucha's book "Starting to Dominate from the First Crosstalk Brother" Chapter 33: Fire and Water Are Incompatible? [Kneel down and beg for flowers and give evaluation votes] Chapter comments.
Commentary on Chapter 189 of the Killing Plan in "Martial Arts: Binding the Evil System at the Beginning" written by Zhutian 13.
What happened to cross talk recently?
You are the first of all novels written about life to be sold at a high price.
Regarding the book "Star Railroad: Starting Command Simulator" written by "Determined not to sell out"! Chapter 38 Two New Members Chapter Commentary.
The protagonist's name is Lin Dong? Isn't there the word "cloud" in the middle? Isn't he senior?
About Chapter 90 of Jiang Mucha's book "Starting from the First Crosstalk Brother to Dominate": What can't be discussed? [Please subscribe automatically! Please provide chapter reviews.
Commentary on Chapter 153: Pepe is Angry, written by Jiang Mucha in "Starting to Dominate from the First Crosstalk Brother".
Chapter 122 of "Siheyuan: Destroy My Marriage, You Don't Want to Provide for Old Age" written about dreaming in the dream, begged Qin Jingru, but was rejected miserably! Chapter review.