Condor transition! Cover the sky and set sail!
Let's walk into Zhou Xin's path to becoming a strong man together!
The introduction is weak, please see the specific content.
This novel and its characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.
Reader comments
I should be participating in the competition soon. I would like to make some suggestions. I hope they will be useful to the author.
1. Don't win more than a dozen cards in a game. There are many books about LOL. When they write about the game, the protagonist does something, and then the opponent shocks the audience, shocks the explanation, and shocks the whole network. You can win two or three cards just by writing the reaction, which is awkward and boring.
2. Don't force the game to lose. If you can win the game 3:0, don't write it as 3:2. It's really unnecessary. Don't write the protagonist as the kind of jungler who will die as soon as he is caught. Maybe it can't be one against five in the game, but it can be done in the novel.
3. Don't write teammates and coaches as **brainless*. Some books are really right except for the names, but the characters are completely wrong, which seriously affects the perception. And to be honest, you can make the protagonist both a player and a coach. One person can get two salaries, which also saves a lot of things.
4. Since the protagonist can play in all five positions, it's better to find a team that can shake it up. This will be more interesting.
Sons beget grandsons, grandsons beget sons, and sons and grandsons are endless. Brutal.
Spiderzi's world is indeed good. You can use the knowledge of the system to perfect the eternal calamity. Devouring souls and devouring energy of the system just complement each other. In particular, a large number of monsters can be used to strengthen the devil.
I think this book is the best one written by Green Pigeon!
We all know that we have to travel through time to cover the sky, but after arriving in Beidou, we still say that we can't remember what we saw a long time ago? Are you kidding me? Don't you read it ten or eight times before you go? You don't know what's in it before you go, so why go get it?
Go be a duck. You can have a harem, have sex, and be rich. It's very suitable for you.
He said that when others were hungry, he would be full after taking out the excrement.
The spring of life will be wasted. How much do you despise Zhetian?
Anu has a deep love for Li Xiaoyao. Haha, have you seen it?
Bells, towers, and tripods are generally not used for fighting? ? ? See if the Chaos Clock is not often used in battles! It's just that the level you start using is too high. You must at least be proficient in advanced laws such as time, space, or sound and soul. Even using a knife is better than using a sword. There are too many great swordsmen, and you can't be the first.
Does this tifa have 3D or is it just a picture?
It would be nice if I could show it to you, what more could you ask for?
It's so fake. How could a Yukila bite the Queen in such a painful way?
Although there seems to be nothing wrong with your development, I see that Hu Yifei has all kinds of misunderstandings and then messes up and loses her temper with other people's affairs. Why is she so unhappy?
Will Yusanjia accept it? If you accept it, how will Dr. Mei deal with it? After all, he is the same as Mei.
The author doesn't want the Virgin Mary as the main character, come on
You can add Piaomiao Sword Technique, Ten Thousand Gods Tribulation, Sword Lord's Sword Technique, etc., Which are all more gorgeous.
The title can be closed and the content is inconsistent.
Let's write about the apostles first. I think the plot of Poisoned Milk Powder is much more exciting than most anime.
It's very interesting, no gossip at all, but does the author not have children yet? If there is no problem with education at the age of three, he can already be a naughty child.
Just look at how many stars you have
If you take the treasure snake, you will also get the medicinal materials. There will definitely be a lot of century-old Ganoderma lucidum, thousand-year-old ginseng, etc.
When the author wrote about the Seven Fairies in the Land of Joy, he felt as if he had not seen a woman in a hundred thousand years.
Nine drops of Pangu's heart essence and blood took shape and experienced several tribulations, but the result was so **
Update quickly and don't enter the palace
Aren't you going to write about the Great Master?
I'll wait until the sky is covered to see.
Gun. . Fang Tian draws a halberd. . . Three-pointed two-edged knife
Fuck, what is reality? Are those worlds fake? It's illusory.
Why are there suddenly so many chapters? Didn't I only have it for a few days? I am on March 5th, what about you?
I should be participating in the competition soon. I would like to make some suggestions. I hope they will be useful to the author. 1. Don't win more than a dozen cards in a game. There are many books about LOL. When they write about the game, the protagonist does something, and then the opponent shocks the audience, shocks the explanation, and shocks the whole network. You can win two or three cards just by writing the reaction, which is awkward and boring. 2. Don't force the game to lose. If you can win the game 3:0, don't write it as 3:2. It's really unnecessary. Don't write the protagonist as the kind of jungler who will die as soon as he is caught. Maybe it can't be one against five in the game, but it can be done in the novel. 3. Don't write teammates and coaches as **brainless*. Some books are really right except for the names, but the characters are completely wrong, which seriously affects the perception. And to be honest, you can make the protagonist both a player and a coach. One person can get two salaries, which also saves a lot of things. 4. Since the protagonist can play in all five positions, it's better to find a team that can shake it up. This will be more interesting.
Sons beget grandsons, grandsons beget sons, and sons and grandsons are endless. Brutal.
Spiderzi's world is indeed good. You can use the knowledge of the system to perfect the eternal calamity. Devouring souls and devouring energy of the system just complement each other. In particular, a large number of monsters can be used to strengthen the devil.
I think this book is the best one written by Green Pigeon!
We all know that we have to travel through time to cover the sky, but after arriving in Beidou, we still say that we can't remember what we saw a long time ago? Are you kidding me? Don't you read it ten or eight times before you go? You don't know what's in it before you go, so why go get it?
Go be a duck. You can have a harem, have sex, and be rich. It's very suitable for you.
He said that when others were hungry, he would be full after taking out the excrement.
The spring of life will be wasted. How much do you despise Zhetian?
Anu has a deep love for Li Xiaoyao. Haha, have you seen it?
Bells, towers, and tripods are generally not used for fighting? ? ? See if the Chaos Clock is not often used in battles! It's just that the level you start using is too high. You must at least be proficient in advanced laws such as time, space, or sound and soul. Even using a knife is better than using a sword. There are too many great swordsmen, and you can't be the first.
Does this tifa have 3D or is it just a picture?
It would be nice if I could show it to you, what more could you ask for?
It's so fake. How could a Yukila bite the Queen in such a painful way?
Although there seems to be nothing wrong with your development, I see that Hu Yifei has all kinds of misunderstandings and then messes up and loses her temper with other people's affairs. Why is she so unhappy?
Will Yusanjia accept it? If you accept it, how will Dr. Mei deal with it? After all, he is the same as Mei.
The author doesn't want the Virgin Mary as the main character, come on
You can add Piaomiao Sword Technique, Ten Thousand Gods Tribulation, Sword Lord's Sword Technique, etc., Which are all more gorgeous.
The title can be closed and the content is inconsistent.
Let's write about the apostles first. I think the plot of Poisoned Milk Powder is much more exciting than most anime.
It's very interesting, no gossip at all, but does the author not have children yet? If there is no problem with education at the age of three, he can already be a naughty child.
Just look at how many stars you have
If you take the treasure snake, you will also get the medicinal materials. There will definitely be a lot of century-old Ganoderma lucidum, thousand-year-old ginseng, etc.
When the author wrote about the Seven Fairies in the Land of Joy, he felt as if he had not seen a woman in a hundred thousand years.
Nine drops of Pangu's heart essence and blood took shape and experienced several tribulations, but the result was so **
Update quickly and don't enter the palace
Aren't you going to write about the Great Master?
I'll wait until the sky is covered to see.
Gun. . Fang Tian draws a halberd. . . Three-pointed two-edged knife
Fuck, what is reality? Are those worlds fake? It's illusory.
Why are there suddenly so many chapters? Didn't I only have it for a few days? I am on March 5th, what about you?