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Reader comments
Li Er's system is probably not the Tauren system, right?
Even if your Baji collapses, will you still be destroyed internally? Bajibeng is originally an Anjin technique, but wouldn't putting Anjin among the pirates mean internal destruction? To be honest, I feel that the domineering system is like a castrated version of the internal force of martial arts. Basic operations of internal force such as internal destruction are actually advanced techniques.
Can the author change the protagonist's fighting style? Instead of always clasping his hands to ask for something, can he add some movement changes during the battle? Otherwise, your battle scene will be too monotonous.
Not worth it. How much luck does it cost to choose rewards at the beginning and forcefully renew the life of the dynasty? Can the protagonist pay it off in 100 lifetimes?
Laughing to death, why do you need to activate your own understanding? A glance at the alternative system text
You described these three girls in such detail and perfection that I would be sorry if you didn't accept them all. This childhood sweetheart must be accepted. I see you haven't written about business yet, but it's all on the shelves. The introduction is written out.
Xiaoyao Hou is the day after tomorrow, Liancheng Bi is the day after tomorrow, are you crazy?
Batman made me empty? It's an insult to both characters.
The writing is too messy, and the little one is too trouble-making.
What the hell, how boring are you writing Werewolf?
Martial arts, martial arts are skills, and gong is the essence! Now only Wu is left, Gong has been lost! Even if there are still, they are not accessible to ordinary people like us!
Nine out of ten first-person books are disappointing
Write, why don't you write? I'm speechless.
When will we be able to let those female protagonists see the strength of the protagonist instead of hearing it.
In fact, according to the author's writing, the final result is that after the aliens leave, the higher-ups squeeze other humans for management rights.
Unless those so-called slaves have a way to directly appeal, after all, no matter how absolute rights are, they will cause absolute corruption.
And it seems that those high-level officials want to get the technology before they can rebel.
How annoying! Where does this go? S5 mid laner, they are all big brothers, ig has a meat machine, lgd is a great player
You have written down the obvious advantages and disadvantages of martial arts. You have learned the moves and disadvantages by repeating them. They all write villains very well
Why can't Shaolin's beloved be killed if others can be killed? This bald donkey is not a good person, right?
It's already the 13th! The latest update is still number 10! It just came on the shelves!
How about we make a bet about Chapter 21 of "Zong Wu: The Best Sword in the World" written by Beicheng Eleven Shao? Chapter review.
Commentary on Chapter 08: Whoever Touches My Woman Will Die in "Zongwu: The Best Sword in the World" written by Beicheng No.11 Shao.
Ah Fei reminds me of a certain funny guy
Comments on Chapter 29 of "The Comprehensive Manga: Starting Ever Rider, Saving Megumi Kato" written by Gulu Gulu.
It's not embarrassing at all, but the power system is not clear enough; I feel that using the mixed martial arts world may be a better choice.
It feels like a game, you fight which boss at which level.
Wow, if I were this farm, I would be so angry
Commentary on Chapter 66 of "The Best Sword in the World" written by Beicheng Eleven Shao: He knows how to kill.
This is the reason why your book has poor results. The fighting is too perfunctory, and the force value is not reasonable to be honest. There is no desire to read it. Ximen Chuixue was fooled early in the morning. I won't say anything. The scene in Ye Gucheng was inexplicable. Do you still need to spend resources to recruit a younger brother when you already have Long Yuan? One's own strength is the foundation, and it seems that there is a second dimension? Don't tell me what kind of anime character you're going to make, then I won't watch it.
Commentary on Chapter 49: World Store in "Film and TV: Joining a Gang to Rob the Tomb, Saving Ye Liuxi at the Beginning" written by Qi Yue Wuyi.
Regarding whether to carry an umbrella or to carry a knife, "My luck was against the heavens, I turned in a blank test and I became the number one scholar in a new subject" Chapter 44: Zhu Houzhao's CPU was burned out, and he was caught off guard? (Second update, please support!) Chapter review.
Li Er's system is probably not the Tauren system, right?
Even if your Baji collapses, will you still be destroyed internally? Bajibeng is originally an Anjin technique, but wouldn't putting Anjin among the pirates mean internal destruction? To be honest, I feel that the domineering system is like a castrated version of the internal force of martial arts. Basic operations of internal force such as internal destruction are actually advanced techniques.
Can the author change the protagonist's fighting style? Instead of always clasping his hands to ask for something, can he add some movement changes during the battle? Otherwise, your battle scene will be too monotonous.
Not worth it. How much luck does it cost to choose rewards at the beginning and forcefully renew the life of the dynasty? Can the protagonist pay it off in 100 lifetimes?
Laughing to death, why do you need to activate your own understanding? A glance at the alternative system text
You described these three girls in such detail and perfection that I would be sorry if you didn't accept them all. This childhood sweetheart must be accepted. I see you haven't written about business yet, but it's all on the shelves. The introduction is written out.
Xiaoyao Hou is the day after tomorrow, Liancheng Bi is the day after tomorrow, are you crazy?
Batman made me empty? It's an insult to both characters.
The writing is too messy, and the little one is too trouble-making.
What the hell, how boring are you writing Werewolf?
Martial arts, martial arts are skills, and gong is the essence! Now only Wu is left, Gong has been lost! Even if there are still, they are not accessible to ordinary people like us!
Nine out of ten first-person books are disappointing
Write, why don't you write? I'm speechless.
When will we be able to let those female protagonists see the strength of the protagonist instead of hearing it.
In fact, according to the author's writing, the final result is that after the aliens leave, the higher-ups squeeze other humans for management rights. Unless those so-called slaves have a way to directly appeal, after all, no matter how absolute rights are, they will cause absolute corruption. And it seems that those high-level officials want to get the technology before they can rebel.
How annoying! Where does this go? S5 mid laner, they are all big brothers, ig has a meat machine, lgd is a great player
You have written down the obvious advantages and disadvantages of martial arts. You have learned the moves and disadvantages by repeating them. They all write villains very well
Why can't Shaolin's beloved be killed if others can be killed? This bald donkey is not a good person, right?
It's already the 13th! The latest update is still number 10! It just came on the shelves!
How about we make a bet about Chapter 21 of "Zong Wu: The Best Sword in the World" written by Beicheng Eleven Shao? Chapter review.
Commentary on Chapter 08: Whoever Touches My Woman Will Die in "Zongwu: The Best Sword in the World" written by Beicheng No.11 Shao.
Ah Fei reminds me of a certain funny guy
Comments on Chapter 29 of "The Comprehensive Manga: Starting Ever Rider, Saving Megumi Kato" written by Gulu Gulu.
It's not embarrassing at all, but the power system is not clear enough; I feel that using the mixed martial arts world may be a better choice.
It feels like a game, you fight which boss at which level.
Wow, if I were this farm, I would be so angry
Commentary on Chapter 66 of "The Best Sword in the World" written by Beicheng Eleven Shao: He knows how to kill.
This is the reason why your book has poor results. The fighting is too perfunctory, and the force value is not reasonable to be honest. There is no desire to read it. Ximen Chuixue was fooled early in the morning. I won't say anything. The scene in Ye Gucheng was inexplicable. Do you still need to spend resources to recruit a younger brother when you already have Long Yuan? One's own strength is the foundation, and it seems that there is a second dimension? Don't tell me what kind of anime character you're going to make, then I won't watch it.
Commentary on Chapter 49: World Store in "Film and TV: Joining a Gang to Rob the Tomb, Saving Ye Liuxi at the Beginning" written by Qi Yue Wuyi.
Regarding whether to carry an umbrella or to carry a knife, "My luck was against the heavens, I turned in a blank test and I became the number one scholar in a new subject" Chapter 44: Zhu Houzhao's CPU was burned out, and he was caught off guard? (Second update, please support!) Chapter review.