Li Ning, a shut-in, transmigrates to Runeterra, and the timeline seems to be much earlier than expected. The mature and beautiful Caitlyn has only just become a police officer in Piltover.
Hoping to make a home for himself in chaotic Piltover, Li Ning starts dating the lovely Caitlyn. He thinks he will spend the rest of his life happily ever after, but he never imagined things would take such an unexpected turn.
Ultimate weapon: High-energy reactions detected ahead: harem and genderbending! Anyone who can't handle this, click X and evacuate immediately!
This novel and its characters are entirely fictional. Any resemblance to real people or events is purely coincidental. Do not imitate.
Even if it's criticism, I accept it
After reading the first few chapters, the favorability between the policewoman and the protagonist is already 95, and I am still afraid of a stranger being attentive to the policewoman. Is your favorability fake? Or do you have such low self-esteem that you are afraid that a stranger will flirt with your heroine?
To be honest, this article can only be regarded as a mediocre work. When I first saw the comments, I looked at it with a critical eye, and even refused to read it. But later, how can I put it, a well-conceived article will be ruined by the author's writing style, and on the contrary, a well-conceived article will also be brought to life by good writing. In my opinion, the author's article is free, and at first I thought it was for practicing writing. After reading it, it is considered to be above average, but some elements are still poorly grasped. Here, I would like to mention a little personal opinion: the personality of the characters must be well established, especially the protagonist, which is very important, and then there is the transition. A common problem in many novels is that the transition is poor, making it difficult for readers to connect, making it incomprehensible to read. The most important thing is the endowment of emotions. A good article can arouse the reader's sense of identification, and produce different emotional fluctuations with your article. I think this is commendable. For example, in the policewoman section, if the details and psychological activities are well described,
The protagonist is simply a **, why is it that almost 80% of every novel in Feilu has a loser as the protagonist? He is simply a mentally retarded idiot. Almost 80% of every novel where the protagonist is a loser is a stallion. In harem novels, he can't walk when he sees a woman.
Holy shit! Author, your book is poisonous! I tried to vote for you five times, but has there been any change? Five cards were cast in vain, right? I have seen ATMs swallowing cards. This is the first time I have seen ATMs swallowing monthly passes. This thing is not worth it.
If you think it suits your taste, you can send flowers, leave a comment, support, give a reward or something, but forget it~
After looking at the picture, the author, you are such a special girl and a talented person, which piqued my interest a lot.
Oh, my vampire has been transformed into a girl.
I have collected these pictures from you
The LOL I play seems to be fake?