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I really don't like Kirby. He is a navy but he has no sense of responsibility as a navy. He has a cowardly character and cannot be a pirate. It would be okay if he lives in the branch and waits for death. But in a frontline battlefield such as the War on Top, he hurts the morale of his own people. Even if I am the beneficiary, I still look down on him. He doesn't even position himself correctly. He can't balance responsibilities and personal feelings well. I don't know what the use of this character is?
Three-meter wheel, you are also a talent
Even novels began to feature marriages. . . You need a golden finger to find a good one. Does that mean there are too many people who are fooled by blind dates?
By the way, even if it is used by the protagonist, can platinum defeat the Black King of Hades? Although I laugh at Laocai, Laocai is the ultimate
How should I put it, in a world without demons, can you practice by deducing the techniques of other worlds? At best, you can only learn from them, and the rules of different worlds are different. If you can practice the techniques of any other world, wouldn't it be a mess? And what about the protagonist who just started practicing and wandered around the world? And don't you need to accumulate slowly in cultivation? It's just Level 1 and Level 2, it's too fake. If you can advance to several levels by simply understanding the skills, then why do you need a genius and earthly treasure, and why do you need to practice? I personally feel that the first few pictures are quite well written, and I change the exercises here and there to deduce and learn from them, but the latter ones feel quite toxic, I don't care about anything, and I don't need to practice, I just need to understand the exercises, and I like to travel through the waves everywhere.
The first part was fine, but then I switched to entertainment. Isn't it teaching people to make money?
The front part is good, but there is a word "water" at the back, and the process of recruiting women, which shows the author's nature as a loser man. When recruiting women in the time-travel plot, it is extremely erotic. As long as they are women who appear in the time-travel world, they have accepted them. Moreover, these women become mentally retarded when they meet the protagonist, and they simply ignore the character of these women. Anyway, I only see that as long as a woman meets the protagonist, she just wants to devote herself. Author, how hungry are you in reality! ! !
Chapter 11 Instigating Qin Shihuang to kill his mother, what do you think? ? ?
Everything I have read so far, the world setting is very messy. This is no longer called a mindless novel, but a refreshing novel. The setting of the deadlock is the same as that of the ancient times, but the protagonist dares to frighten him in a golden elixir stage, crosses several realms in a single tribulation, and connects the world. It does not take long, so follow me The realm is soaring like a rocket, regardless of world levels, restrictions, rules, etc. For example, the Monkey King in Journey to the West has a deep heritage. I don't know what realm he was born in. It took him many years to learn skills before he became an immortal. A low-level martial arts master can achieve golden elixir in a few days faster than Wukong.
I may have misunderstood the relaxation of 267
The author has never been in the system, or does he know anyone in the system? Even if some capital arrives in the Magic City, the mayor is sweating nervously? ! He is a deputy national leader. Not to mention some capital, he is one of the top foreign plutocrats. He is ignored. His future is guaranteed to be one of the nine giants! Will you still take capital seriously? ! Where is the Magic City? ! One of the world's financial centers! There are many trillion-level group companies!
Is this how your family receives box lunches? ? ? If you don't want to write about family members, why don't you just write about orphans?
I'm really speechless. What's coming next is completely wrong. Who are you talking about?
Mr. Qianberry, have you ever heard of Gu Chensha? How high do you think Gu Chensha is?
*Berry, I feel like you are becoming a eunuch, your last few pictures are starting to feel wet.
I read three chapters and threw it away. This is such an exaggeration.
Well! If you don't know how to brag, don't brag. If you don't have any ink in your mind, you should brag. Either introduce the information directly about an item or don't write about it. If you praise it in a mess, it seems like you are very educated, which is not enough e-experience.
I remember when Zhe Tian first drew the Yunxiao clone, he said that half of her strength was a quasi-immortal emperor. How come during the ghost disaster, she said that her master (Tongtian Cult Leader) was an immortal emperor...
After writing six book reviews, the author can still write more than 1.8 Million words!
I read Chapter 9. The protagonist just traveled through time, faced death, got a golden finger, and then killed ghosts and drew a lottery. Then he was killing ghosts and drawing a lottery. I felt that the protagonist had no sense of belonging to the world traveled through. It felt like he was playing a stand-alone game. I suggest that the author kill the supernatural team leader and use the feelings of family and country to stimulate the author and give him a sense of belonging to the world. It is not recommended to give the protagonist power or give the pig's feet a halo of wisdom.
*Berry, here comes Mr. Sheep. I have been following your book for so many years and I haven't even added Mr. Sheep.
Can anyone tell me if I checked wrongly or if the 840 million of Shenxiang Zhenyujin has another meaning.
Byd, 6/2 is not updated, is it a eunuch?
Generally speaking, after the books suddenly become tepid and unpopular every day, most of them are looking for shooters. Don't ask, asking is based on experience.
I don't have money to buy books to read. Is there any good one?
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