Invincible from the Beginning

This Mahayana period is fake, you can't fly yet

The Chaos Holy Body starts at the beginning, and the Nine-turn Mysterious Technique can only become an immortal. The start is so grand, how should the Nine-turn Mysterious Technique be written?

Is there anyone in the Super Seminary who is more beautiful than me, the Heavenly King Hexi?

Your setting will not work. The Super Seminary is a grand world. Even if it is just a world of technology, its power system is also a world of high martial arts. It has already involved the setting of the universe. As a result, you have a martial arts world that has not even explored the earth. The protagonist will become invincible if he doesn't go there. So I conclude that your book is written in this way. You know how to write about jumping, because you set the power system too high at the beginning, and you won't be able to describe it later if you don't write it as invincible. It's better to write about pure technology if you want to write about technology. Fortunately, the ending will be more attractive to readers. If you want to write fantasy, start from a low martial world. A high martial world like Super God can be used as an ending, but not as a beginning. Of course, this is purely a personal opinion, so you don't need to take it too seriously. After all, not everyone can write about traveling through the heavens. You may just write books to make a living. Everyone has their own difficulties, and good books are hard to come by.

Isn't it too strong to cover up others?

I have admired three men, one is Xu Xian, the other is Dong Yong, and the third is Ning Caichen, one dares to be a snake, another dares to be an immortal, and the last one is not even a ghost. Passed. Only after watching Hua Qiangu did I realize that Luo Shi is a real man who dares to fuck a caterpillar. I despise Sun Wukong the most. After he immobilized the seven fairies, he went to steal peaches, but I have to admire Sun Wukong's father. I was so drunk that I was able to get pregnant with a stone. Some people said that I had water experience, but I just slapped them one by one. You Isn't this nonsense? I didn't know how to upgrade without water before. Now I understand. . Anyway, a 50-word sticker can be upgraded. You can also earn experience. Upgrading requires experience, so I copied this sentence. I'll reply as soon as I see a post, and I'll finish it.

Kesha is dead, He Xi is dead, Liang Bing is dead, the era of three kings is over, and the era of void is coming.

Super seminary? Compare with the perfect world

That's right, ZongHeng will automatically become Fei Lu after it is published.

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