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I have been reading novels in Feilu for seven or eight years, and I have spent a lot of money. I have discovered a problem. There are many eunuch and last novels, and I often spend a lot of money to read them. The result is no beginning and no end. The nature has just come out, and it is like a basin of cold water. It is refreshing after all. What is even more ridiculous is that some novels have dozens of chapters in the first part and chapters in the back that have completely turned into two novels. Rather than saying that the author is deceiving consumers, it is better to say that the Feilu platform is deceiving consumers.
If you could only choose three, which three would you choose? 1. Increase IQ by 30% 2. 15 Years younger than now 3. Be invisible for 1 hour every day 4. Will not get sick 5. Growth of 8 cm 6. You can talk to animals 7. Read other people's minds 8. The appearance is stunning. 9. Foresee your own death 10. Reply 6? Like to get the above skills
Although I don't mind increasing the talents and rewards, it's more fun this way, instead of the small rewards. I saw the small rewards in other books at that time, which really made me speechless. To buy something, I still need tokens, S tokens or something like that. This is a good deduction, don't you think? I suggest you write this in a more enjoyable way. Also, as soon as you enter the plot, engage in ambiguity, fall in love, and engage in plot while falling in love. Holy shit, this is the first time I have seen this kind of main god space. You might as well travel through it yourself. Wow, and the male protagonist is a bit timid. He is obviously very strong. Don't say invincible, but invincible in that world, right? The result is really slow. Damn it, I can't stand this. It can be done quickly, but it has to be so slow. And I don't like this Swordsman. Isn't it interesting? Because so many people have written it, I have seen more than a dozen books like this! So I suggest not to write too many emotional scenes, just focus on strength!
Chapter 9: What's the use of deceiving others with ten main god points? Write this in one chapter? Does the protagonist lack this thing? Just killing two plot characters is enough. Seeing the protagonist cheating for ten points seems to make a lot of money. If the protagonist is an ordinary passerby cheating, it will indeed be profitable, but if a powerful senior person is substituted, cheating this little thing and using coercion and inducement will make people laugh to death.
What is written on the back?
No, the power system is not set well. A Swordsman can get to level A, which is too bad. A century-old ginseng can increase the true demon body by more than 2%. Personally, I feel that your fantasy world is useless. It has only been around 60% after 4 years. Is this still a fantasy world?
Why does the content change when I see more than 80 pages? Is my phone malfunctioning?
What did you write after the Hokage exam? Princess Uzumaki actually knows that the sneak attack is a reincarnation? ? ?
What are you writing? It's a mess.
Can't see, it will take 24 hours
He is actually afraid of the way of heaven. This is not the way, so the main god is so weak! It can't even compare to fantasy, let alone wash away wasteland.
The fantasy world we promised is gone.
From the very beginning of the system, I knew that I would recognize my father and my mother later on, so I liked being the son of a stranger so much.
The main god space is limited to ten people, if you want it, 8 will be deducted first! The person who scored 8 is really smart.