FGO System of the Moon World

Ah, you are obviously a single heroine. Why is it classified as a harem? It's so uncomfortable.

The original is really good. I found a new ghostwriter nmsl to make money. I lost my mother carelessly. I didn't expect it.

He is a heavenly master but he is caught by ordinary people! Ridiculous

Wasn't Lao Yang fucked by Lao Li when he was in Feilu? Why is he back with full health! ! ! ! ! !

It's a waste at the beginning. I don't know what my virtues are and what the consequences are. I still harm other girls. I just think about myself and don't think about other girls. It's obvious that my character is not good.

You can add some romance; since the protagonist has traveled through time, his mind should not be too child-like. The thinking in the first few chapters is too child-like and not like an adult who has lived for decades.

The undead does not necessarily mean demonization. The undead are the souls of death. There are also holy souls or souls with elements. They are not necessarily demonized. Personal advice.

Sincerely, except for the fact that some parts are too subjective, some places are a bit novice, and some places are a bit secondary, overall it is a very good FGO novel.

The dragon-slaying warriors who bathe in dragon blood will eventually turn into evil dragons

It's been almost 10 years since I watched Feilu. This is the first time I know that VIP needs to be upgraded manually.

This is the weakest protagonist I have ever seen

Author, King Furong's emotions fluctuated too much. I don't know about the later period, but at least in the early stage, even if the hero died years and decades ago, King Furong's emotions fluctuated very smoothly. Even if there was an additional protagonist, it would be impossible for him to have such feelings as blushing and shy within a few years. Of course, it does not mean that he He is an elf without emotions, but King Furong has no awareness of this aspect at all, and his reaction is relatively slow, so I feel that even if there is an additional protagonist, unless there is a super god-level hypnotic device, I feel that it will be more reasonable for King Furong to have such emotions after at least twenty or thirty years.

I like Zoro more than Luffy, the true man, Chongnuo, and Luffy. . . I really don't know if it's because I was beaten stupid since I was a child or if it's a side effect. I just have no common sense, no brains, and all kinds of speechlessness.

Tnnd, update it, why not update it, update it! More! If you don't update it, right? If you don't update it, I will kill you.

Quick update, science fiction genre, just different genders! Quick update

The author's biggest failure is the comprehensive manga review. People who join other worlds don't know how to write, while people from other worlds can only compete in combat.

I've only read a few dozen chapters, and although there are some minor flaws, it's generally pretty good. Like many other authors who write this, they'll just write it off*.

I just read more than 30 chapters of this book and I fell in love with it. The logic is very hard and it's totally fun.

Many chapters are unreadable and boring, so I stopped reading them. Thanks!

Everyone knows that Gao Xiaoqin and Gao Xiaofeng are both traps and they still jump into them, so aren't you just giving your handle to Zhao Ruilong** Novel

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The relationship between the characters is so messy, haven't you seen the original work?

Past Buddha, present Buddha, future Buddha, light the lantern, great sun, Maitreya Buddha??? These?