The Hunting Ground: I Am Zheng Qiudong

Feilu is a very expensive place, I agree to deduct 1

The Roy people are considered worn out. When the protagonist is in prison, he finds another one. If you really love him so much, this is considered a betrayal. After you got a new boyfriend, did you sleep with him?

You want it too, a broken-shoe Roy man, bah, heh tui

It's a mess. If you don't like the original work, don't write it. If you like it, don't change the plot. Especially the forced virginity is particularly **. If you can't accept someone being a mistress, just change the heroine. If you can't accept Xiong Qingchun's past, don't write her. It's really ** to twist the plot.

If it were me, I would write about how to de-brainwash the MLM leader and run away with all the money of the MLM organization.

It's better to call me Zheng Qiudong than Ding Chunqiu.

My childhood suddenly turned into a plot about cultivating immortals. The tokens are so unprofessional.

I think the hunting ground written by the author is still very good, the writing style is good, it reads smoothly, and it is waiting to be felt. I hope the latter part can also be maintained

It's really poisonous, the opening chapter is still a prisoner at the age of 30

The author should note that Feng Yue's husband is not Zheng Qi, Zheng Qi is Feng Teng's friend