Onward, Boy: It Starts with Armed Girls

Continuing to write depends solely on my hobbies and feelings. I just let people who have a little bit of the same idea as me read it when they are bored. There is no charge for a word, so it is normal for my writing to be unsatisfactory, right?

The first time I looked at my female classmate's private parts, I was very surprised. It was so dark and dirty, and even felt very erotic, especially because there were two pieces of wrinkled flesh, which were a bit dark and greasy. When she saw my surprised and frightened expression, she was also very shy and embarrassed, and said to me: Don't mind, this is also the first time I let a male classmate look at my private parts. I was nervous because I put too much soy sauce. Beef noodles are not like this.

Did you graduate from primary school? It's so childishly written.

Will the author publish another book about armed girls?

Because this was a spur of the moment, I just tried it casually for my first book, and I didn't plan on writing it well. I originally wanted to try writing it in the first person, but then I found that my ambition was too high and my ability was not enough. I saved more than a hundred chapters later, and I wanted to finish that volume and see if it was OK before posting it, but I couldn't continue writing. I still overestimated my level. I cried TT

When you write a novel for the first time, isn't it normal for your writing to be poor? After all, I'm just trying However, I admit that the previous writing is very poor, because I am crazy myself. "Armed Girls" almost copied the anime, because at the beginning, I didn't know how to write it at all.

It's very messy, the writing is really messy

It's good to write "Seriousness" and "I Love You"

I hesitate to say anything, why did I delete all the chapters about Armed Girls except for the miko uniform? I want to review it one more time (no one really wrote it)

Armed Girl is my favorite anime. No one has written about it, so I just saw this one. It doesn't cost any money. Do you have any reason to hate it?