Pirates' Strongest Mercenary

一个开篇你硬是拖到了付费章节。

Since Silly Zhu passed away so early, why did he let his own mother die? Doesn't the author want the protagonist Silly Zhu to enjoy maternal love? If that's the case, then why did you let the protagonist pass so early?

The plot of "Siheyuan" is set in Beijing around the 1960s. How do the cesspools in Beijing bubble up in the winter? When writing a novel, you don't need to be realistic, but you also need to be logical and reasonable. Besides, the boss's gramophone broke and he called the police instead of looking for a home appliance repairman. Isn't this just to advance the plot? Online novels are for passing time, but readers should not be treated as ***.

The author has to explain every action, every line of dialogue, every thought of the protagonist, as if he is afraid that readers will not understand the protagonist's operations. After reading 20 chapters, there are all kinds of explanations. The first conversation with Wang Yongzheng was very stiff. Over-explanation will affect the sense of substitution, and it will also make people feel that they are using too much force.

The author might as well go to the palace, or you can change your father later! (Funny face)

Chapter 2: Where did the ability come from? Did it come with it?

只要神超不说话你就赢了

Why are each chapters so small?

I've grown so fat that I haven't used the three monthly passes this month~ You know

You Lu Feiming knows everything, but Zhe Tian was written after the Dragon Clan!

Damn it, is King of Fighters Orochi so weak? Are the Yonko stronger than Orochi?

The social circle is only the characters you summoned. They come to a world just to grab resources. After they are upgraded and defeated, they go to the next world without leaving a trace.

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If you can't write, don't write, don't ruin the original work.