Crayon Shin-chan: An Ordinary Passerby

Did you go too far in writing Xiaoxin? The protagonist robbed Xiaoxin of all the plot and also robbed Nanazi. Is there something wrong with the author's brain?

It's entirely the author's oblivion

The first completed crayon novel in the history of Feilu Crayon, just focus on these two items: free and beginning and end. Author, I respect you as a man!!!

I love you so much, author. Ignore the trolls and just write with peace of mind. You write very well. This is the most conscientious Crayon Shin-chan fanfic I have ever seen.

Not to mention that the author is finished, this book is still free to read. There are a lot of VIPs in the comments who basically defend this book. Most of the people who criticize are still non-VIPs. I just want to say, do you have a good conscience?

I don't really think a 20-year-old girl would like a five-year-old child. This is a bit unrealistic. I think it should be written more realistically to make it more interesting.

I thought it was pretty good, but I didn't like the harem plot a bit.

What the hell are you doing with these emotional dramas?! A brat can make a mature woman fall in love with him, and he's not even one. Please put some restrictions on Shotacon.

Just because you are free, I think you are the most handsome.

Authors write books for free. If you don't like them, you don't have to read them. Please don't criticize them, okay?