Leisurely Days in Love Apartment

Dressed in the villain's name and written about the content of a stallion. It's just a headline. **

I think the protagonist should not be the God of Earth, but the God of Mold. Everyone related to him encounters ghosts. The author wrote the book nominally about the earth god, but the story deviated from it by thousands of miles. The author definitely didn't make an outline before writing, and as a result, he couldn't grasp the plot as he wrote. He made the land god into a bad luck person, and the good subject matter was ruined.

What is the first mythical beast that you want Ash to shrink his belly?

I feel that writing female characters is super redundant. If you are a heroine, write more interactions with the protagonist. Don't add a female character every time you write about a place or event. If you add too many characters, it will become stereotyped. It's very annoying to watch. If there are multiple women, just focus on a few female protagonists. If you add too many, it will become confusing.

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