Original title: Online Game Naruto God Level Large Scale
When Long Tian tortured Princess Kaguya with the god-level giant Dragon God in the Ninja Peak online game, he was electrocuted in the Internet cafe and traveled from the earth in 2016 to 500 years later.
Long Tian, who had just passed through the soul, ushered in a game "invented" by humans on earth in which character abilities can be synchronized with reality - Naruto! !
The strength is 100% synchronized with reality! !
What surprised Long Tian was that the god-level giant Dragon God followed him through time. What was even more surprising was that no one on earth knew what Naruto was at this time!
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This novel and its characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.
Reader comments
The women in the novel all have a sense of superiority, who gave it to them?
How can your protagonist, a student who has never left the village, know so much information about the ninja world? And there are so many scenes in the future where the protagonist has never appeared before and no one doubts it?
When someone asks you what your name is, just say Ji Xinghai. Don't add Shi Jue. It's too low and embarrassing. The Ten Jue must be mentioned first by others to be powerful.
I read a few of them and I just can't bear the poison. What the hell is this written about?
…………This book……I……I'm sorry I don't know what to say…………
The author has finished the fifth part. Can he write some emotional drama and let Judai open the harem directly? Then he can go to the world of the sixth part. After the end of the sixth part, there will be a duel king battle. After that, the author is free to write the world of Extreme Summoning. The main reason is that there are too few love scenes now, and the female protagonists have very few roles. It is clearly mentioned that Asuka and Rei from GX, Izayoi from 5DS, Akari and Risu from zexal, Yuzu from ARC, Rin, Serena, Kurosaki Ruri, Rei, and Asuka are all said to be female protagonists, but the characters in the fifth part are now except for Yuzu. Other than the hints, I didn't write anything else at all. It's clearly mentioned that she is the heroine, but there are too few emotional scenes. Let's write more emotional dramas. But is the emotional drama in the fifth part a direct fusion of the four heroines into Rei, then five souls, five personalities, and then when they get along with Judai, because of Yuzu, all five souls have a crush on Judai? If this is the case, it is also possible
The author is a two-parter. He writes about the immortals in the courtyard, the traitors pretending to be households with five guarantees, and bullying the orphans of martyrs, but nothing happens. The protagonist is in danger of being shot even if he eats meat. I really can't help but laugh, the author is mentally retarded.
I feel that the protagonist written by the author only cares about himself and his family, never thinking about others. Humans are living animals. If you have this ability, try to help your compatriots. Forget about foreigners. Compatriots will not help you. Giving you this ability is equivalent to having a sense of mission and should be free from human dangers. In addition, you have absolute force, and no one can take you. Well, some people may think that I am a Virgin. In my opinion, a person who always opposes the protagonist, even assassinates and performs small tricks, is against the protagonist, and the protagonist saves him, is called a Virgin. And this kind of rescue is weak, that is not called a Virgin. In my opinion, that is a hero, and there are only a few people with selfish motives, and most of them are. In the end of the world, as long as there is a mouthful of food to eat, people will be very obedient.
Also, the people in the archaeological team will die. See if the archaeological team is doing human affairs? Digging graves and exhuming tombs, the valuable corpses can be preserved, but the worthless corpses are disposed of. This is not as good as some regular tomb robbing sects. After all, they only steal things and do not damage the corpses, leaving the tomb owner in the soil.
I advise you to stop writing and waste your youth.
The writing is okay, but how many chapters should I write for this bo5 game? How many chapters have been lost in this second game, and it has been repeated over and over again, can it be over?
It's really unbearable what you wrote about being a fairy. Not to mention martial arts, even history is better than immortals. Let's not talk about the top ten artifacts. After all, there is no clear or standard ranking for Pangu axe, Donghuang Bell, etc. You can see how much of an immortal you are by being able to easily smash the Donghuang Bell with your sword.
In Chapter 65, when you are married to the queen, "celebrate with the crown" is used to describe villains and villains, similar to the villain's success, but cannot be used to describe the protagonist's subordinates and citizens.
Mrs., Mrs., Mrs., Too slow.
I feel relieved to see so many people praising the author.
After reading Chapter 16, the protagonist seems like a sidekick.
Did you find that Lu's novels have a very large number of words, and they are still relatively small, with thousands of chapters, and even an urban novel can be written into the universe? ? ? ? ?
Earth Reincarnation with Unlimited Chakra
The plot of A Thousand Years Later is so confusing. After Long Tian defeated Frieza, he went on a rampage and was rescued by Whis. He was then taught by Whis for a while. Beerus also woke up, which shows that the three of them knew each other through glitches. But after fighting Buu, why didn't he recognize the Saiyan God Goku again when it came time to fight him? It's so embarrassing to watch! !
Write carefully, write all aspects clearly, don't pace too fast, don't write according to the original plot, I hope Kuina doesn't die, and women can't be strong. Author, are you serious? Are there no strong women in One Piece? ? ?
The layout needs to be improved
Commentary on Chapter 253: A New World of Battle in the book "The Destiny of the Nation: A Man Has Just Been Buried, He Was Chosen as the Savior" written by One Second into the Play.
Chapter 44: The Youngest Lieutenant General (Please collect it, please give me flowers!) Chapter 44 of "Zhou Weiguo: The Red Police Empire" written by Che in Kindergarten.
The writing in the middle and later stages was too poor.
Commentary on Chapter 402: Stability is Important in "The Life of an Investigator Starting from Saga" written by Sa Leng.
Water experience water experience water experience
It looks okay, but a bit expensive
Commentary on Chapter 141 The much-anticipated battle [2] in "Animation Arrival: The Godless King" written by Long Tianshen.
Regarding "Siheyuan: I'm a fool, I'll beat you up at the beginning!" Written by the ancestor of the demonic world! Chapter 004 [Banggan steals things, Uncle He teaches you how to be a good person] Chapter review.
Commentary on chapter 51 of "Siheyuan: Banggan's Happy Life" written by Honghuang Siheyuan: Sabotaging He Yuzhu's blind date [seeking follow-up reading].
The women in the novel all have a sense of superiority, who gave it to them?
How can your protagonist, a student who has never left the village, know so much information about the ninja world? And there are so many scenes in the future where the protagonist has never appeared before and no one doubts it?
When someone asks you what your name is, just say Ji Xinghai. Don't add Shi Jue. It's too low and embarrassing. The Ten Jue must be mentioned first by others to be powerful.
I read a few of them and I just can't bear the poison. What the hell is this written about?
…………This book……I……I'm sorry I don't know what to say…………
The author has finished the fifth part. Can he write some emotional drama and let Judai open the harem directly? Then he can go to the world of the sixth part. After the end of the sixth part, there will be a duel king battle. After that, the author is free to write the world of Extreme Summoning. The main reason is that there are too few love scenes now, and the female protagonists have very few roles. It is clearly mentioned that Asuka and Rei from GX, Izayoi from 5DS, Akari and Risu from zexal, Yuzu from ARC, Rin, Serena, Kurosaki Ruri, Rei, and Asuka are all said to be female protagonists, but the characters in the fifth part are now except for Yuzu. Other than the hints, I didn't write anything else at all. It's clearly mentioned that she is the heroine, but there are too few emotional scenes. Let's write more emotional dramas. But is the emotional drama in the fifth part a direct fusion of the four heroines into Rei, then five souls, five personalities, and then when they get along with Judai, because of Yuzu, all five souls have a crush on Judai? If this is the case, it is also possible
The author is a two-parter. He writes about the immortals in the courtyard, the traitors pretending to be households with five guarantees, and bullying the orphans of martyrs, but nothing happens. The protagonist is in danger of being shot even if he eats meat. I really can't help but laugh, the author is mentally retarded.
I feel that the protagonist written by the author only cares about himself and his family, never thinking about others. Humans are living animals. If you have this ability, try to help your compatriots. Forget about foreigners. Compatriots will not help you. Giving you this ability is equivalent to having a sense of mission and should be free from human dangers. In addition, you have absolute force, and no one can take you. Well, some people may think that I am a Virgin. In my opinion, a person who always opposes the protagonist, even assassinates and performs small tricks, is against the protagonist, and the protagonist saves him, is called a Virgin. And this kind of rescue is weak, that is not called a Virgin. In my opinion, that is a hero, and there are only a few people with selfish motives, and most of them are. In the end of the world, as long as there is a mouthful of food to eat, people will be very obedient.
Also, the people in the archaeological team will die. See if the archaeological team is doing human affairs? Digging graves and exhuming tombs, the valuable corpses can be preserved, but the worthless corpses are disposed of. This is not as good as some regular tomb robbing sects. After all, they only steal things and do not damage the corpses, leaving the tomb owner in the soil.
I advise you to stop writing and waste your youth.
The writing is okay, but how many chapters should I write for this bo5 game? How many chapters have been lost in this second game, and it has been repeated over and over again, can it be over?
It's really unbearable what you wrote about being a fairy. Not to mention martial arts, even history is better than immortals. Let's not talk about the top ten artifacts. After all, there is no clear or standard ranking for Pangu axe, Donghuang Bell, etc. You can see how much of an immortal you are by being able to easily smash the Donghuang Bell with your sword.
In Chapter 65, when you are married to the queen, "celebrate with the crown" is used to describe villains and villains, similar to the villain's success, but cannot be used to describe the protagonist's subordinates and citizens.
Mrs., Mrs., Mrs., Too slow.
I feel relieved to see so many people praising the author.
After reading Chapter 16, the protagonist seems like a sidekick.
Did you find that Lu's novels have a very large number of words, and they are still relatively small, with thousands of chapters, and even an urban novel can be written into the universe? ? ? ? ?
Earth Reincarnation with Unlimited Chakra
The plot of A Thousand Years Later is so confusing. After Long Tian defeated Frieza, he went on a rampage and was rescued by Whis. He was then taught by Whis for a while. Beerus also woke up, which shows that the three of them knew each other through glitches. But after fighting Buu, why didn't he recognize the Saiyan God Goku again when it came time to fight him? It's so embarrassing to watch! !
Write carefully, write all aspects clearly, don't pace too fast, don't write according to the original plot, I hope Kuina doesn't die, and women can't be strong. Author, are you serious? Are there no strong women in One Piece? ? ?
The layout needs to be improved
Commentary on Chapter 253: A New World of Battle in the book "The Destiny of the Nation: A Man Has Just Been Buried, He Was Chosen as the Savior" written by One Second into the Play.
Chapter 44: The Youngest Lieutenant General (Please collect it, please give me flowers!) Chapter 44 of "Zhou Weiguo: The Red Police Empire" written by Che in Kindergarten.
The writing in the middle and later stages was too poor.
Commentary on Chapter 402: Stability is Important in "The Life of an Investigator Starting from Saga" written by Sa Leng.
Water experience water experience water experience
It looks okay, but a bit expensive
Commentary on Chapter 141 The much-anticipated battle [2] in "Animation Arrival: The Godless King" written by Long Tianshen.
Regarding "Siheyuan: I'm a fool, I'll beat you up at the beginning!" Written by the ancestor of the demonic world! Chapter 004 [Banggan steals things, Uncle He teaches you how to be a good person] Chapter review.
Commentary on chapter 51 of "Siheyuan: Banggan's Happy Life" written by Honghuang Siheyuan: Sabotaging He Yuzhu's blind date [seeking follow-up reading].