Star of the Police Force

Author, how did you insist on writing more than 300,000 words? Also, our ancestors created punctuation marks for you to use. It makes my head hurt to see them.

It's a good name. You have to be worthy of "Star of the Police". The name you chose should be well-written! There are no symbols. It gives me a headache to see it. Oh my god! I don't know what to say anymore

What do you think of this novel, which is written in vernacular from a first-person perspective?