Naruto: The God of the Earth

**Bar. . . You must be sick if you still ride on a horse to redeem Sharingan when you have Earth Fruit. . . Killing someone and then going crazy is like this**

As an adult who traveled through time and space, this is how you behave? Like a child, he understands the plot and is surprised. He writes too many irrelevant plots. Writing a two-dimensional story is the same as writing fantasy. You can do scientific research like Uncle Snake, but if you bring fantasy into it, it will be very inconsistent.

There is a natural devil fruit. At least it must be written about jounin. You tell me, it can't be elementalized, or you can write about this and say that using the devil fruit requires consuming chakra, *ma.

The protagonist is 6 years old, has genin and chunin strength, and lives and fights with a thousand kilograms of weight? Wdnm, I feel like my intelligence has been insulted. Does the author know the concept of a thousand pounds? In the first Dragon Ball, Goku only carried 200 kilograms, and Li only carried two lead weights in the chuunin exam. This is not an instant explosion, but carrying ten strong men on his back at all times. And the protagonist is only 6 years old. Doesn't it really affect his development? Your Yi Jin Jing has become a fantasy technique, right?

Have you thrown away the soil fruit? I didn't see any cultivation at all. Needless to say how powerful the fruit cultivation awakening is, I also made those messy things. The author's IQ is worrying, and the writing is really not good, but it is still readable.

I don't believe in evil, but after reading two chapters, it's really a lie

After reading a chapter or two, I was convinced that he was a charlatan.

The protagonist actually wants to practice the art of immortality. Let's not talk about the difficulty and possibility of cultivating immortality in the Naruto world. The time spent to cultivate immortality alone is hundreds of thousands of years. When the protagonist succeeds in cultivating immortality, the ashes of the original protagonist will be gone.

Ahem, **The author should replenish his brain before writing a book.

Only after being beaten like a ** did he show his true strength.