Wuxia: Evil Saint System

It's smaller, the layout is smaller You should write a protagonist who goes on an adventure in outer space right after he is born.

The word martial arts master appears almost five or six times in every chapter. It's so annoying to see this word now. Even if you want to make the protagonist look awesome, you don't have to repeat the martial arts master's martial arts master over and over again, right?

A martial arts saint? The kind that takes ten meters per step?

... Entering ninja school at the age of three? Are you kidding me?

This cut is too harsh. One hundred combat power can explode the moon. This Cellulite is not even as good as one hundred combat power.

Playing basketball turns into football, it's really ****

You're not filming a TV series? What kind of summary is there at the beginning of each chapter? There is only so much Braille in one chapter, and almost a third of it is repeated! ! ! ! ! !

I don't know if I'm out of my mind, but I just listened to your story here, and I listened to it for a long time. A good novel, but it sounds like a story. After listening to so much, I always feel like something is wrong. It turns out that you treat novels as stories. Your uncle's.

It should be Qin Shihuang who started calling himself me, Shang seems to be calling him "Gu"

Also, when you arrive in Jinzhou, Lin Shiyin, don't forget to collect

There's too much nonsense, the structure is complex, the setting is hip-pulling, the full text is like an old lady's foot-binding cloth, it's smelly and long.

After arriving at the Hokage, I jumped so hard that I lost sight of it.

Can you please write about Wang Ling's beauty quickly? It looks too disturbing.

Crazy, if you don't accept the red girl, don't play ambiguous, you will kill people, you have to lick Uncle Jiu who moved mountains.

。。一件替身娃娃你弄出两个分身。后面还说自己获得了a哥的能力，前面属性介绍也没写

都不知道作者干嘛十多天一更要么太监算了更又不更

Why do you think the main character is stupid to death?

俞飞鸿还是处？真牛逼

All are ants under the law of heaven, and saints are nothing.

Brother, I vomited. I never thought that Ye Qing was not dead?

Three emperors have become emperors, and only mine is left [Da Ming: Start with Chongzhen, I have the emperor's success system]

How can I say that the first part looks normal, but after more than 200 pictures, there is no distinction between men and women, and the punctuation marks are messed up. The second part is even more rubbish, and the male protagonist is also a rubbish. That's it for writing a book. You'd better not write a novel, and most of the plots are repetitive. Anyway, I'm **.

It's a bit hard to understand. The author may be a novice. Many times the content is too naive and illogical.

这写的的是什么东西，父母祭天法力无边？

The main character of the channel is always pretending to be cool

You are a top cai?? Fa

Deliberately released Danzo alive to ** us~ pig's feet

Commentary on Chapter 28 of "Martial Arts: Evil Saint System" written by Eel Stir-fried Chili: After this kiss, you will return to poverty (with more flowers).

Commentary on Chapter 17: Descending the Mountain and the Plot of "Martial Arts: Evil Saint System" written by Eel Stir-fried Chili.

Another author who sells meat on his own behalf