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Reader comments
As the protagonist of a fanfic, when it comes to gaining power, he is not as good as the protagonist of the original work. Is it necessary to cut him like this? And at the critical moment, you will definitely let the protagonist use his ultimate move, but it is also a situation where he can just win. This plot is very exaggerated, you know, isn't it cool! This virtue is enough after one use. It is not as durable as the gun sister in the loli period. It is ridiculous. You must know that this is the power of the protagonist! Instead of drawing blue in the game! ! !
How awesome! Author, your writing like this is really poisonous. Where did the text messages come from on the new mobile phone you just bought? The card has not been inserted, and the bank card has not been bound. Where did the text message come from? Shouldn't it be on an old phone? ? ?
The book was already broken when Xia Bing and the male protagonist broke up on Huanhuang Island. Readers who come to Feilu to read the book have very little patience. The author cannot control this book.
There are too many missing girls. If you count the 7 girls in Yuan Zhi Kong World, you can accept one.
What do you want to do, author of this autumn moon**?
VIP charges, are there any benefits?
Date A Live missed a lot
The protagonist doesn't care about his own cultivation. Why do you spoil your wife?
? ? ?
Commentary on Chapter 2 of "The Age of Elves: Invasion of Reality" written by Yizuishu Sake: Receive the Initial Elves.
I felt like vomiting after watching the beginning. Is Xu Damao going to lick Silly Pillar? Are you sick if you don't keep quiet about your chicken being stolen?
What's the point of using the Sharingan's ability to attract girls...
You still have the nerve to come back, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, how long has it been, don't you know? ! ! !
How is the strength of the author's protagonist divided?
I always feel that the protagonist is very strong but also very weak?
Green yourself. This book is a classic Mask Ray. First, use one identity and appearance to capture the heroine. After that, you deliberately don't tell the heroine the truth and use another appearance to get close to the heroine. Author, do you think you are very imaginative?
In addition, there are countless missing daughters, dead daughters, and gifted daughters. It's okay to forget the dead girls, but they are all marginal supporting characters. Why are the main heroines of some works missing? Even given away.
**. Bah.
The quality is too poor, only suitable for newcomers
"Martial Arts: Download Full Level Magic Skills and Talents" written about not carrying an umbrella when it rains Chapter 41: The best sword in the world! Chapter review.
The male protagonist was exhausted and died, the identification was completed
On average, one out of three chapters is unreadable.
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As the protagonist of a fanfic, when it comes to gaining power, he is not as good as the protagonist of the original work. Is it necessary to cut him like this? And at the critical moment, you will definitely let the protagonist use his ultimate move, but it is also a situation where he can just win. This plot is very exaggerated, you know, isn't it cool! This virtue is enough after one use. It is not as durable as the gun sister in the loli period. It is ridiculous. You must know that this is the power of the protagonist! Instead of drawing blue in the game! ! !
How awesome! Author, your writing like this is really poisonous. Where did the text messages come from on the new mobile phone you just bought? The card has not been inserted, and the bank card has not been bound. Where did the text message come from? Shouldn't it be on an old phone? ? ?
The book was already broken when Xia Bing and the male protagonist broke up on Huanhuang Island. Readers who come to Feilu to read the book have very little patience. The author cannot control this book.
There are too many missing girls. If you count the 7 girls in Yuan Zhi Kong World, you can accept one.
What do you want to do, author of this autumn moon**?
VIP charges, are there any benefits?
Date A Live missed a lot
The protagonist doesn't care about his own cultivation. Why do you spoil your wife? ? ? ?
Commentary on Chapter 2 of "The Age of Elves: Invasion of Reality" written by Yizuishu Sake: Receive the Initial Elves.
I felt like vomiting after watching the beginning. Is Xu Damao going to lick Silly Pillar? Are you sick if you don't keep quiet about your chicken being stolen?
What's the point of using the Sharingan's ability to attract girls...
You still have the nerve to come back, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, how long has it been, don't you know? ! ! !
How is the strength of the author's protagonist divided? I always feel that the protagonist is very strong but also very weak?
Green yourself. This book is a classic Mask Ray. First, use one identity and appearance to capture the heroine. After that, you deliberately don't tell the heroine the truth and use another appearance to get close to the heroine. Author, do you think you are very imaginative? In addition, there are countless missing daughters, dead daughters, and gifted daughters. It's okay to forget the dead girls, but they are all marginal supporting characters. Why are the main heroines of some works missing? Even given away. **. Bah.
The quality is too poor, only suitable for newcomers
"Martial Arts: Download Full Level Magic Skills and Talents" written about not carrying an umbrella when it rains Chapter 41: The best sword in the world! Chapter review.
The male protagonist was exhausted and died, the identification was completed
On average, one out of three chapters is unreadable.
Commentary on the second chapter of "Rescuing Two-Dimensional Beauties" written by Ye Yu silently: Suguha Kiritani.
Commentary on Chapter 25: The Style of Two Swordsmen in "Saving Two-Dimensional Beauties" written by Ye Yuwusheng.
Commentary on Chapter 16 of "The Black Cat Group on a Moonlit Night (continued)" "Saving Two-Dimensional Beauties" written by Ye Yuwusheng.
Commentary on Chapter 38: Mirai Kuriyama of "Saving Two-Dimensional Beauties" written by Ye Yu Wusheng.
Commentary on Chapter 27 Temporarily Ending of "Rescuing the Two-Dimensional Beauty" written by Ye Yuwusheng.
Commentary on Chapter 14 Icarus of "Saving Two-Dimensional Beauties" written by Ye Yuwusheng.
Commentary on Chapter 27: Going to the Outside of the Giant Stone Monument, "Rescuing the Two-Dimensional Beauty" written by Ye Yuwusheng.
Commentary on Chapter 24 of "Saving Two-Dimensional Beauties" written by Ye Yu Wusheng: Asuna's Completion Guide.
About Lemony's book "Entertainment: Playing the God of Medicine at the beginning, I can't hide my god-level acting skills" Chapter 12 Lottery Lottery Lottery Lottery! Chapter review.
Commentary on Chapter 25: The Feast of the King, "Rescuing the Two-Dimensional Beauty" written by Ye Yuwusheng.
Commentary on Chapter 23: Meeting Aoi Tohsaka for the First Time in "Saving Two-Dimensional Beauties" written by Ye Yuwusheng.
About Chapter 24 of "Journey to the West: The Poor Monk Xuanzang, the Golden Chan Buddha" written by Fu Shuting, Dzogchen, Arhat status! Chapter review.