Sun Wukong Travels Through Time and Space to Play Online Games

I am writing a new novel that combines animation, online games, and fantasy. I am not a veteran yet. Some parts of the writing are not good. I hope everyone can help me and let us complete my work together. I accept any suggestions, but I hope you won't scold me. Good works are created through discussion, not scolding. I hope you all can help me This novel and its characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.