In the World of Pili, I Can Trade Across the Myriad Worlds

Running account, the pig's feet are stupid and sweet, and they even lick them

Brother, you should check it over after you finish writing. There are too many typos or poor language. It will not waste much time. You are responsible for yourself and the readers.

I want to know, have you read the novel written by the author? Can you read it smoothly?

Are we just saying there is a shortage of women? For a bitch to slander the men in the original work, those who don't know would think you are the screenwriter. ㄟ(▔,▔)ㄏI'm just speechless

Few read Pili, and even fewer read Golden Light. The title of your book refers to Pili, and the content of Golden Light is more than that of Pili. You can't figure out the priorities. No wonder your data is not good. If you want to write about other worlds, I doubt whether your book "Perak" can account for 1/5 of the content? Don't you write deals? Doesn't the title of your book involve trading? I can't see the content of your transaction now. It's 170,000 words. Does the content of your transaction account for 10,000 words? Does Pure Thunder contain 80,000 words? How many thousand words have you written about the Golden Puppet Show? How many chapters have you written about the Golden Puppet Show? If you can't figure out the priorities, how can you write a good book? How can your data look good? Most of your book came from Pili, but now you have written so much about Golden Light.

Commentary on Chapter 104 of "Thunderbolt Suffering I Can Trade All Heavens and All Realms" written by Second Young Master Xu, Chapter 104: The Sunblind Evacuate, and the rise of the Holy Lion Dynasty.

Comments on Chapter 316 of the Attack and Defense of the Monster Market by the Second Young Master Xu in "Thunderbolt Suffering I Can Trade All Worlds".

How to say it? The plot is well-written, but there are very few novels of this type, and the good ones can still be read. It's just that the protagonist is too double-standarded, and she's also made to look like a humanoid. She's a girl who can sleep with her without even seeing her face to face. In particular, it involves some relatively loyal characters in the original work. As a result, only one of the female characters in the original work has the same name. The other characters are completely different, and there is really no sense of substitution.

Comments on Chapter 92 of "I Can Trade All Heavens and Worlds" written by Ergongzi Xu, Chapter 92: Marriage of Converged Interests, Demonstrating Value in Questioning Hongchen Chapter.

Commentary on Chapter 28 Painting Banquet, Jiangnan Chunxin in "Thunderbolt Suffering I Can Trade All Worlds" written by Ergongzi Xu.