Name: from the Head of a District to the Official of a Feudal Territory!

I read more than forty chapters and then read the comments. The problem for this author is fragmentation. This is obviously a harem romance novel, but the author insists on constantly making the protagonist say in the main text that he wants to become stronger, so women are a burden, and the female protagonist is a eunuch if he doesn't fall in love with her. Then the author said that all girls will accept it, and it has to be a matter of course. Then I wrote that the protagonist said he wanted to become stronger and not have girls. Author, do you have a split personality? If the protagonist says it once, then it's just a joke. Do you have to keep saying it and emphasize it? Also, Dicuona, originally you didn't write much, just getting stronger and conquering the game at the same time. It's normal, but what did you emphasize earlier? It doesn't matter at first. You have to emphasize that the protagonist wants to become stronger quickly and is not in a hurry. And Yakumo Murasaki, are you a donkey that can't move without being beaten? Or is it the protagonist? Do you have to write a big crisis that forces the protagonist to become stronger? To fight for the so-called glimmer of hope? Isn't it okay to meet Yakumo Murasaki again after the protagonist becomes stronger?

Come on, brother, you wrote Xiao Lun'a. You just copied the original work and devoured it. Anyway, if you change it to the protagonist, I still think highly of you. Just copy it. You just copied the original work. I feel like you are treating someone else.

The most annoying thing about novels like this is that they have already killed two marshals and a general. What else do they need to prove in the end? ? You want a piece of shit approval? ? ?

666. Are you deleting all the venomous comments to cover up your true colors?

The first chapter also said that each person has a talent to fight monsters and level up. As a result, except for Pig's Feet, everyone else showed no talent at all, and they were just ordinary people.

Author, you have a heroic appearance

Just throw in some antimatter legion and you'll be able to push it.

By the way, does the author really not consider opening the magical India? Even the content that can be talked about is very outrageous, and I feel that it is very interesting. For example, the stealth attack submarine made by India was substandard and high in noise. After it was put into service, it damaged Pakistan's sonar, which led to the completion of the upper limit of 150 decibels of alternative stealth and the detection of more than 200 decibels of noise. Another example is the extremely outrageous Hindustan Airlines. Regarding the maintenance process of jet aircraft, Da Mao is 22 There are 24 roads in Eagle Sauce, and Daiying cut them in half to save money and only have 12 roads. However, this is only the responsibility of the field base. In fact, it is still required to be sent to the factory for a complete maintenance and overhaul every year. Hindustan is extremely cut into 2 roads, and it is revealed that in theory, workers must have received junior high school education. In fact, there are many illiterate people who have not gone to school in one day and buy academic qualifications to sneak in. After repairing two aircraft, the remaining parts are enough to assemble another one.

Can the pig's feet be improved in abilities, such as superpowers or waveguide abilities, and more pets?

These pictures are totally worthless. As little as possible

Normal clothing stores sell military uniforms? That's outrageous

This is the update once it's released, one chapter a day! I want to spend money without giving you a chance, and don't give you face?

Can the Heaven-defying Seven Demon Swords be stopped in the middle? It's been too long since I've seen it and I forgot.

Write less plot and more originality

What I mentioned before was Guancanghai, which was also owned by Cao Cao.

Ruotuo is possessed by Renren (I forgot his name). When you write the protagonist, it is equivalent to directly killing the person possessed by Fat Tuo.

Do you have any heroes you want to see?

Five updates every day, please collect flowers, it is really important

Will you be okay wearing a cheongsam tomorrow? ! !

Commentary on Chapter 25: Great Victory, written by Little Lazy Dan, "Three Kingdoms: God-level Choice, I Summon the Eternal One".

Commentary on Chapter 42: Li Jing recognizes the master in "The Great Song Dynasty: Marrying Mu Guiying at the Beginning" written by the Bone Painter.

Just sit back and wait for you to write the essay, which is a breeze. No one will read your book Nowadays, those who write marginal articles use poetry to drive a car. Even Dawei Tianlong writes about driving a car.

The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work

Not sure about the book. The game is good. Thanks to the author for helping me find a good game. I will also try to follow the book.

How did Liu Bei, the poor magistrate of Pingyuan County, develop the eighth-largest army in the world? With this legion, would he still join Yuan Shao?

Several people have been added, please don't add them indiscriminately, it's very dramatic.

How many realms are there in total? Can you post a book review and pin it to the top of the page to let us all know? It will be convenient.

About "Original God: Past Life Exposed" written by Jiujiujiujiu, starting with the eternal dream! Chapter 67 I am the game administrator! Chapter review.

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