The Yingjiang Killing Line Was Exposed, and the Ancestors Were Shocked

Just do it in one step, the protagonist comes forward and proposes to prevent addiction, so that the little cute friends can have an "unforgettable" childhood.

He's really immature and can't write well. He talks about magic like a child. Apart from swallowing the alchemy pill, he's reckless and childish. How can he still be a villain? Are you still practicing evil? Is this called a demonic figure? Look more at other people's cultivation. Whether it's evil or not, what's right or wrong, what you say and what you say and what you do is not consistent.

The author is funny, the king of beasts, when will it be the turn of the dragon clan to be the spirit of all things? Qilin is the king of beasts. Even if there is no Qilin, the status of the white tiger among the beasts is far higher than that of the dragon clan. The white tiger of Gengjin kills the three clans of Phoenix, Dragon and Qilin. That one is worse than the dragon, and the white tiger is second only to the ancestor dragon.

Damn it, it's almost like buying sheep's head for meat, Yang's appearance is more than Liu's, you might as well be Yang's thief or Di's thief

Too many words. Secondly, it doesn't matter whether Garp recruits him or not. He takes too many favors into account. The protagonist wants to be the king, so he should be ruthless. Secondly, Ace's rescue is useless. He is arrogant and arrogant. He might as well be killed. Luffy, if he hadn't eaten the Nikka fruit, look at who among the pirates would protect him. He makes trouble everywhere. He can't tell the difference between the situation and only cares about recklessness and the crew. Who knows what changes will happen to this fateful protagonist?

"As a historical figure, Qin Shihuang should be commented in two parts. Qin Shihuang's progressive role in the process of historical development must be affirmed, but after unifying the six countries, he lost his enterprising aspect, became complacent, indulged in idle pleasures, begged gods, built palaces, and cruelly oppressed the people. It was very boring. Chen Sheng and Wu Guang opposed the tyranny of Qin, including opposing Qin Shihuang, which is completely just."

What the hell are you writing about? The main character is so talented and yet he writes a crappy beginning. Can't he just explain the pros and cons? The previous plot also said that the beast master and the beast mother cherish each other equally. The next one is that the beast mother is above everything. The beast master is a tool.

I have a bold idea...

If this system were in a fantasy or immortal world, it would be unimaginable.

My friend, Shrimp Emperor, is here and has seen the latest chapter.

The content does not match the title, it is a deceptive novel

After reading the instructions, he shook his head and clicked X.

I'm speechless. A leader of a force is like child's play. He calls others "uncle, aunt, sister, brother." Can this be what a leader of a force calls others? He doesn't put himself in that position at all. Don't talk about being down-to-earth. This is not down-to-earth, but immature. A leader of a force cannot behave like this.

I don't know what I should say about you as a good author. I look at your comments section and most of them feel the same as me. The plot is messy, the combat power is seriously inconsistent, the magic changes are random, the characters are inconsistent, and you ignore all kinds of poisonous points. After reading part of it, it's true that you wrote a fanfic. Except for the changes to the characters and the names of things, I feel that it has nothing to do with the original work.

Eagle Sauce Kill Line should be shown to people in the 1990s.

Author, you don't want to be ten centimeters shorter, right?

Once I see something related to Kapro Roger, I don't really want to watch it ≥?(??????)?, If you are a golden lion or something, you still have something to watch, (????

Of course, the United States also makes flowers of its own.

Why is there Qin Huairu? Everyone is better than her. Cancel the talisman, otherwise the talisman will only be used by one person

If you are here to test the waters of a new article, you can ignore my words. If you are ready to finish writing a book, this will update your efficiency. Unless you can enshrine the gods in one book, there really won't be any good data! (??ì_í??)

. . How would you rate this book? You say it's good, but you think it's very messy and scattered, and it looks weird. You know, the protagonist has the look of a crooked-mouthed Dragon King, and the heroine feels like a crooked-mouthed Feilu. Do you understand? The writing is very messy. You say he is not good, but I have finished reading it. The plot is also well written. It's just weird.

After seeing a lot of people in the martial arts world who like to practice fantasy skills, have you never considered whether the spiritual energy in the martial arts world can be practiced?

If it really doesn't work, please do human flesh to the author and urge him to update it. Does anyone know the author's real name? Where?

The plot of this book can be found in several books. This is copying. Damn it. This way I can also be the author.

Isn't this the last wave of Qin Huairu with cubs?

You can take this ** out by yourself, it looks really ugly.

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