Comprehensive Comics: People Are in the Wrong Place, the Herrscher Shocked the Gods

1. The protagonist in the book comes from a noble family background, but what I felt was that it was mostly a story about someone who was just starting out. The background is very small, or even non-existent. The Meili Sheep's egg can't explain this level of background at all. **Wkm away from Bi Diao, it will be there in a short time..., Your Bi Diao is just a bit common, I don't know how to complain about this 3. You also said that the background of the villain is similar to that of the protagonist, but I think the competition between juniors of that level should not be so... Um, intellectual? This is explained in the book, but it still feels a bit awkward. There is nothing wrong with it being an elven book to pass the time, but some problems are more obvious. I am just giving my opinion, and I don't mean to ridicule the author.

When writing about the ultimate, it doesn't even have a high combat power index. How can it be called the ultimate? Half of the fun points are in that.

His strength is too weak. If nothing else, Black and White's control over ghosts is ridiculously strong. If you think about it, he is at least the King of Ghosts.

Do you have any evidence of female murder?

What was the name of the author's last book?

In fact, I would rather see you focus on entertainment. Come on, author

Come on, come on, I'll give you all the flowers

The name of the protagonist is so chronological, it makes me **

How should I put it? First of all, Tezuka and Sanada actually don't know each other... They are not old friends... Because Tezuka was late for the game, Yukimura seemed not to participate. Then Sanada won the championship, and Tezuka came to challenge Sanada and shaved his head (6:0)...

Psychic beasts are also part of the strength, why not let the protagonist have psychic beasts?

Tsk tsk tsk, I wonder what I should do if I take CP (funny)

How is the eye sector diagram divided? ? ? ? How else can you tell? ? ? Three points, seven points, crossed the line? *, This is the most annoying

Commentary on the chapter "Da Ming: Hoarding 9.9 Billion Supplies Before Time Travel" written by Watermelon Scrambled Eggs 001 The time travel switch is in my hand.

Emmm... Just two words: very*. Plot*, character description*. As for this subject matter, if you want to write an online game, go and see how the Mars Gravity trilogy (also an online game) was written and learn from it.

In fact, it's nothing, it's just fighting monsters, it doesn't highlight the characteristics of the tomb, nor the focus of exploring the tomb.

Chapter 33: Xiao Chen helps Yu Yu analyze He Daqing's chapter review on the book "Siheyuan: I Have a Sign-in System of All Heavens" written about recalling life.