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It would be better to set the protagonist to know those talents in the world, otherwise it would be a bit nonsense to rely on luck to choose the best one every time. And we also like to see the time travellers, not the natives.
Actually, the beginning is pretty good. But what I can't understand is why the emphasis should be placed on the predecessor? And he traveled through time after getting married. I'm really curious. Is it that difficult to change the soul traveler into a time traveler who awakens Su Hui? Even if you really don't like wearing clothes, being reborn in another world, or Su Hui awakening, etc. Then don't you emphasize that soul penetration is difficult? I think it would be acceptable if we didn't emphasize soul penetration and the predecessor. What type of readers is the author's audience? If there is no heroine, rule it out first. After all, it is impossible to have no heroine because of the countess. What a single heroine wants is sweet love, right? For you to time travel after getting married is equivalent to falling in love with someone else's wife in front of someone else's face? There are many female protagonists who can accept soul penetration, but if you directly exclude readers who do not accept soul penetration, it is equivalent to greatly reducing your reader base. Do you want to attract readers by relying on the theme of alien lords?
Only children make choices, of course adults have to watch everything
It's a bit dark, but the plot is designed to show that the protagonist's character is not very decisive, so it's a little twisted.
I'm already a great master, but I'm still so frustrated
Then erase the protagonist, the God of Destruction, and it's over!
Why would Higurashi Kagome lament that magic is much more magical than vampire magic? Isn't this what Kanae should say? I introduce myself as an ordinary high school student. Why do I still know about the vampire arts in another world?
这本书写的还真好，后面的剧情我很期待，麻烦加快更新速度，我们读者都会给你打赏的，千万不要太监了，否则你的这类书再也没人看了
新书一天没三更很难活的，
The front part is pretty good, but why is the content at the back a little shaky?
It's really interesting, *Ma, you had such good results before, please re-send
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