Pokemon Crossover? It Needs Defeat CGs!

Let me state in advance that the ability to use CG after defeat is a function that only the protagonist has, and it is clearly stated in the novel. Don't worry, who is a serious person writing green things in Feilu?

The pace is slow, and the first dozen or so chapters have always emphasized that the protagonist has no money, no house to live in, and his cell phone is afraid of running out of power and shutting down without recharging. Do you think this is a good way to write it? The gift package for newbies is so good, but the others are just like this? Didn't the protagonist say that once you have the appraiser's certificate, there will be no problem? With the appraiser's certificate, the results still need to be advertised. It's over, no one has called to hire the protagonist, or the protagonist won't go find it with the certificate? Moreover, when I was taking the appraiser certificate test earlier, I said that the protagonist was very talented, which meant that the protagonist was a talent. Those big forces didn't invite the protagonist? Don't check the protagonist's account? Are the people the protagonist offended not causing trouble for the protagonist? The protagonist is a novice, and it is very easy to crush him. To put it bluntly, the author's writing skills are not bad, but he is not good at other things. It gives me an experience that I have never written a book. It is boring.

The plot is not great, and the author has brought the bad habits of the previous book to this novel. Too much explanation. Am I here to see your explanation?

It is too slow to warm up, there are too few defeat CG parts, and Pokémon battle training is too "urban", which is a bit tasteless.

Stop writing pre-made dishes that have nothing to do with the plot. It's embarrassing.

It is recommended to adjust the rhythm and find out whether everyone is watching "Elf" or "Defeat CG". If you choose the former, then bring the main character's body armor and a full team of mythical beasts to the table. If you bring in the Magic Forbidden, then the protagonist's armor must be opened to the big side, otherwise why would you serve it? If you choose the latter, then go to the traditional national competition. Fight trainers, gyms, competitions, kings, and champions. It's time to have a good time.

Is it the Wind King who needs saving? Or is it just a group with a black hand? This advancement of the main line has also pushed the level of the first-level god too low, right?

The main feature is the recruitment of girls. Not to mention this, the plot accounts for less and less. It seems more and more boring to write about Pokémon battles instead of writing about intrigues every day. Whether it is focusing on daily interactions with several female protagonists, or going to the gym to collect Pokémon in competitions, it is much better than now. The world view is so big that I have to write all kinds of characters and incorporate them into the setting every day. But now there are only a few Pokémon, and it doesn't look like a Pokémon novel at all. The setting of the comprehensive manga is too confusing and the combat power is poor and blurry, which is also not good.

I have read the latest chapter, and I feel that there is too little plot in CCB. The 190,000-word "compensation time" rule has been triggered three times, once by Horikita Suzune, once by Maori Lan, and once by ANBU "props". On the contrary, the explanation is too long, and it often writes about the settings of Pokémon in large sections. When I read it, I thought for a while that the author should write more plots about the beautiful girl CCB and the protagonist's appearance in front of others.

Now I'm still writing about pretending to be a pig. When it's put on the shelves, it will be the same as Shi.