Comprehensive Comic: They Were All Screwed by the Dormitory System

Silly Zhu is not worthy of Liang Ladi, this is obvious

I like this kind of emotional drama, now the harem of useless deer. The female protagonists are all sisters who love each other, and there are very few Shura fields. This means that no matter how many harems are added in the future, the heroines will be as boring as human beings. Later, the female protagonists can be made to compete with each other to please the male protagonist and let him decide whose home he will stay. There should be more Shura fields. The plain emotional drama is boring.

So frustrated? With the power of Thor, unless God himself takes action, who can fight him? Also, you just wrote about Freya, but why did you write about naked feet in front of a bunch of men? No, forcefully poisoning? Also put this picture, six six six, four

What's going on with these chapters? Sick? So frustrated?

I suddenly became the urban Long Aotian. What I wrote is not necessary.

Come on, absorb the experience of this book. Before writing the characters and world view, you must first think about how to make them complete. You should also pay attention to the popularity of the characters in the world view. For example, Eiriri's mother, Gurefia from Devil High School, and the mother of the princess Lala has the reputation of being the most beautiful in the universe. I won't accept it. There will be explanations. It doesn't matter whether the original work is Ren Qi or not. What's important is that you have to make things come true in the fanfic. It's best to have some foreshadowing before you close it, such as some secrets about your daughter that are difficult to reveal in your inner story. Otherwise, many people will run away after reading the beginning and won't look to see if you make things come true later.

These few chapters of Dicuo are quite frustrating.

If there is no big surprise, the author's flow rate should have collapsed in the plot he wrote later. Although there are only a few pictures of the sadist, it does not have a great impact on readers like me. But the key point is that for this so-called virgin goddess, it is a big drawback. After all, I watched it. Among the many chapters about dungeons, this goddess is not very chaste. I think the author did this to affect the reader's perception. To put it bluntly, it means that it was originally an edible cake, but when I dug it out, I found that a small part of it was maggots. So what do you want me to eat? Thinking at the best, if you dig out that small part, you can still eat it. But if you think about the bigger picture, if you have this kind of maggot in your cake, can you guarantee that it will not appear in other places? This is a big poisonous point. Of course, there must be some readers who think, why am I so picky? But I spent all the money

The recent quality is good, keep up the good work!

I think it's okay. At least for now, I prefer the male protagonist. We'll see what happens next.

Hurry up and code, hurry, hurry, hurry

The sea is full of water. I don't understand that the protagonist always talks about some big truths for no reason. Half the chapter is gone after he talks, and it's so embarrassing.

Brother author, I beg you not to offend the literary youth. I still enjoy reading this book.

Let's wait until the land bug is over and try again to see if you have the motivation to pursue it. The land bug was written so painfully that apart from the beginning, the rest of the game also feels weird.

If you have Yuanyue, please be sure to accept Mrs. Leonora. She is so beautiful and cute. Please accept her to fulfill her identity as a beautiful girl!

Give me a hard blow to my precious heroines! Fight! Fight! Fight!

No one cares about joining a ministry

About the first floor of a small high-rise building, there is a book "Konoha: The Scourge of the Ninja World, the Sixth of Konoha Village" Chapter 28 White Fang's Invitation Chapter Review.

关于555所著《我直播摆烂，赚够两百就下播》 第六章：第一次出手，我只想睡觉。 章节点评。

About Knight Meow's book "I just got my results, and the system asked me to become a knight?" Chapter 55 Chopping melons, vegetables, and leeks! Fear spreads, run away! Chapter review.