Genshin Impact: My Sister Transmigrates as the Heavenly Principles and Forces Me to Marry the Four Shadows

Later, it is best not to write less descriptions of the heroine's appearance by passers-by, and reduce your psychological activities. If you want to perfect the character, you should focus on the plot. Using psychological activities will only make you appear to be incompetent.

From the introduction, you can tell that the protagonist is his sister's tool? What's the use of writing a sister who is so powerful and making her appear to be the protagonist?

There is a problem with your writing. The inner activities of the two people are not on the same channel. The protagonist cannot be guessed. It seems that the protagonist is dull and has poor EQ and IQ. This is not a good way to write a novel.

What is the use of writing a lot about psychological activities? It's just a water book, a bunch of writing

Kill the doctor and the skirmishers. Don't want to see them jumping around.

I feel like the protagonist doesn't need to pretend not to know a lot of things, which really affects the perception.

From Chapter 7 to Chapter 11, the corresponding plot involving Ruonawa's clothing has been completely revised. The revised version no longer involves any issues about the heroine's clothing and the opinions of passers-by. There is no longer any description of the heroine's clothing, appearance, the opinions and evaluations of passers-by. In the original version, I was not aware of lightning protection in some places, which made some readers feel uncomfortable. I apologize again. The new versions of the revised chapters have the words "Completely Revised" at the beginning of each chapter. The refresh mechanism of the furnace is very confusing. It is not clear how long it will take to refresh the revised version. Those with relevant words in front of the chapter are the final revised version. Those without or only with the words "Revised Version" are the original version that has not been refreshed or the partially revised version in the afternoon. There are some things in the original version that the author did not consider carefully, which gave a bad impression. I deeply apologize again and will pay more attention to it in the future.

The fantasy before the camera was knocked unconscious by Qiuqiu people

Because from time to time some readers get anxious after reading it half way through, so I'll put it at the top here to explain about promoting women. The official launch will be in Chapter 49, and then there will be a killing spree in various countries and a large number of pregnancies. But before Chapter 49, I arranged some other plots for two reasons, which may not be liked by all my friends. Here are the reasons. First, the protagonist's power includes life and death, time and space. These four powers will have corresponding plots for him to display. In more than forty chapters, the power of life is first developed, but the power of life is easy to abuse. For example, in the original work, Reindot has not even swallowed up the attachment to life. The story has already begun to be overwritten, and the protagonist needs to be distinguished from her, so the relevant plot is deliberately used to introduce the title of Chapter 48, which is also the attitude of the protagonist: life is not a casual topic, and it is not advisable to manage or nurture, or to live for life. Second, it is already clear in the introduction of the book that the protagonist will definitely have a great life later, but this kind of multi-story novel can easily fall into the above-mentioned situation of living for a living. In order to avoid the appearance of mindless pile-driving, the protagonist must first establish his belief before starting the road to attracting women. Piling may be the result, but the meaning of his journey is not just pile-driving, falling in love with the game wife, and improving his own power for the existing heroines such as Barbara. These are the purposes for him to continue. Maybe not everyone likes these arrangements and related plots, and I can't force this, but I hope everyone won't mislead others by commenting halfway through. Those who are anxious about the protagonist not recommending a girl can just skip to Chapter 49 first.

The author's creativity is very good, but the content is just... How can I put it, I have no desire to read it.