
American Comics: from Map Editor to Immortal God
美漫:从地图编辑器到不朽神灵
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- Fanfiction
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- Film & TV Fanfiction
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- For men
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- 18h ago
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- Faloo
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As the title states, first of all, I will not comment on the first product. The second pet paint, which turns stones into pets, is simply a fantasy. The third is the so-called wallpaper house. Do you know how much impact this thing has on society? First of all, countless real estate bankruptcies have hit banks, and the impact of widespread unemployment among countless reinforced concrete construction workers is the economic crisis. When the fourth, arbitrary door appears, the Iron Corporation can go bankrupt, global aircraft companies can go bankrupt, global car companies can go bankrupt, and global buses can go bankrupt. Their collapse will affect countless industries and cause countless unemployment. Therefore, the country cannot make reasonable arrangements for these people, and it is impossible for these things to allow them to appear.
The protagonist is invincible in this world. Not to mention being a native of the motherland, but don't be too pushy.
Don't be too presumptuous about the strength of those villains. They are always super big and omnipotent universe-level ones. Super big ones are okay. Do you understand the definition of the omnipotent universe? Cats and cats are all omnipotent. And if it was really that serious, OAA or the character they created would have restarted everything.
I dare say that it will be the end after playing in the Champions League or not.
Becoming passive again. . . Such a large space gem was taken away directly. What on earth did you want to write? When the virus came out earlier, I wanted to say that I didn't care about the fire in my back garden until it started to spread. It also caused the space gem to be stolen directly. The key is that I didn't fight back after my belongings were stolen and still picked up girls. I allowed the enemy to develop. You can definitely give the protagonist a bigger attack, but can you not write such an e- and x-person plot?
You don't have many pictures of beauties, so it's good to put some pictures of monsters in other unimportant chapters, otherwise it would be troublesome to search for them. Also, there are some files about the monsters in the new chapter. Can they attack people and cause them to get scurvy, or can they cause scurvy immediately, and attack immediately in a short period of time. The male protagonist already has a dimension, and there is the planet Cybertron. In fact, there can also be a few more behemoths and Titan planets. Aliens invade, and the male protagonist opens the door to let the beasts go. When the aliens face the groups of strengthened behemoths and Titans, they have to shout: Me! Invasion? No, I'm just giving you some snacks.
The writing was terrible. They were all full of star-exploding monsters. How can anyone write about an American drama like this?
I didn't come here to read the original work. I didn't finish counting the dozens of chapters, so I just copied and pasted the original work?
Don't keep fighting, and all your women will be gone.
Doesn't it mean that after being included, the character's skills can be used directly without occupying the skill grid? The template that appears later will be useless. After all, the protagonist only gets skills by using the template. According to the author's description, the physical attributes and energy of the character are not superimposed. How can it be regarded as a template, or just a skill template? Also, if the system version has not been upgraded, the protagonist has the highest The upper limit of attributes is not locked. After all, there are so many original plots that have treasures that can improve attributes. Sometimes the speed of improving strength is faster. When the protagonist gets the treasure, don't say no, and why the item slot has not been used. If the item is taken out and used, will it still occupy the slot? I hope the author has written the outline and can explain the problem.
The protagonist obviously has the strength to directly solve the monsters and take out the anomalies, but he has to write about other things first. Instead of writing about the protagonist, he writes about the scenes of the original plot characters. I don't even know what these characters are for. Isn't it enough that the monsters exist? Was the original plot character written for better water? If you write like this, don't write it here. Reading books in Luzi costs money. I don't have the heart to watch you portray fw other than the protagonist and heroine.
Please work harder and write more second creations with the protagonist as the main character, I will only read that one
After reading the introduction, I didn't want to read it. After reading it, I can only say ******************************************************************
There are only two chapters every day, the author is really bad! ! ! !
The eyes of the sea and the volcanoes are just repaying the cause and effect. What does it mean that there must be auspiciousness when the unicorn comes and goes? Not only do you not have to repay a debt you owe, but it also shows off your nobility? Heaven would actually agree to this? Water in your head?
When will the author Tony's matter be resolved? If you don't remove it even if you know there is a problem, it will look very blocked.
I've learned a lot, it's the first time I saw Liufen's novel in Feilu
Bring Carter and Steve together from the beginning. You are also a talent.
Author, will there be more updates during the National Day?
Before Wu Zetian, the Tang Dynasty was dominated by aristocratic families. The Li family was said to be a royal family, but most of the civil servants and generals under them were from aristocratic families. It can be said that if the aristocratic family wants to rebel against the Tang Dynasty, it is almost guaranteed. So if you want to do something practical in the Tang Dynasty, you should first get the aristocratic family, or wait for the aristocratic family to get you.
Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this!
What does this book say? Well written and with a great subject matter. But it's so messy! ! This protagonist gives people the impression that a firefighter goes wherever there is danger... Knowing that Umbrella and Hydra were there, they didn't want to find a way to clear them out first... And in this crisis world, why does the protagonist have to fight alone? ? The problems of the latest chapters will come out now! The protagonist is very strong, but his teammates are Thor, and maybe Mr. Brother... But the crisis is global in nature... I feel numb looking at it! No other teammates have risen to the world level in the early stage... The invasion is already world level! Women's Federation 2 also saw New York and America being invaded, but the world of this novel...
What do you want to do by writing dozens of Konoha notes in a trading system? There are so many chapters where barter took off early.
The March vote has been cast, I am here as the gou author, chasing the book, I know the consequences and I still cry.
We still need to pay attention to some details. For example, the protagonist's skills are leveled up to level A before the nuclear explosion. Using Naruto's fire escape as an analogy, it feels low. The stereotype of One Piece is that of island-level combat power. I haven't heard any news about Pirate Biao's combat power recently, so he has island-level combat power. Whitebeard has nothing to brag about. He has such powerful cheats. Why can't he break away from Naruto Pirates?
The author makes a suggestion, that is, there is no need to add another world to the world where the protagonist is now, because if there are too many worlds, it will be too confusing. If you think of a world, you can let the protagonist travel to it.
Is there a Digimon World? Especially Wargod Greymon
This book is going to be a eunuch, and I've started updating it every day.
The second one is a bit difficult to evaluate. There are so many good-looking European and American celebrities. The author's aesthetic is really different from ordinary people. Take a look at the breathtaking beauty in the author's eyes.
**Chat**, this shit will ruin the atmosphere of the plot. It's very dramatic. A system is enough. Another chat** is really disgusting. Let's chat nmlgb