Take Stock of High-End Prehistoric Times and Start with a Glorious Start

I cursed the likes and replies. I was violated by my sister every night.

Even the childhood Kaido can defeat Qing Yu Nian. There is a gang in the pirate world. The childhood Kaido has already killed everyone on the battlefield. Qing Yu Nian is definitely much stronger than the Grandmaster.

Good guy, it's black Nuwa again.

In those days, to be high-profile was to seek death.

I'm not telling you that. I've seen most of the popular ones. I don't understand the ones where the initial skills are very powerful or the initial summoned object like the protagonist is a bone dragon. And for various reasons, the person who checked the talent did not see the protagonist's talent. The protagonist filled it in blindly. Why does it have to be written to something that is so different from the actual situation? Is everyone a fool? The protagonist is C on the surface, and then goes to a dungeon to fight monsters. In front of all the heroines, cannon fodder, and college entrance examination teachers, he summons a bone dragon or directly clears the highest difficulty dungeon, etc. Even a fool can see that there is something wrong with the protagonist. It's understandable that you want to hide a little talent, but you might as well get an A or something like that, and you can barely explain it, get a ** talent, and then show your strength for the first time. Is this trying to pretend to be a pig to eat the tiger, or is it just to torture the rich second-generation gangster who has a crush on the school beauty heroine?

Overloading 8G is actually a basic condition. In reality, not many pilots can do it.

You can't read any of the novels included in the inventory, they are basically all useless.

Anyone who replies to this comment will be cursed and molested by Damimi every day and night!

Poisonous point 1. Tour girl, picking up guests, I don't want to say more. 2. Chapter 13, Tentacles

This is a snake-skin symbol of royal power, wealth, and wealth. This is too incomparable, but when I think about it, Wang Fugui doesn't know how to play the King Quan Sword or the King Quan Sword Intent.

Comments on Chapter 2 of "Siheyuan: Three Slaps on Jia Jian at the Beginning" written by Tianbang Big Monster Master A. (Second update, please collect it! Please give me flowers! Please comment!).

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It's easy to be spoiled if you write this way. Naturally, few people have the patience to wait for slow writing. They almost always put it on the bookshelf and wait until the number of words has increased before reading it. However, this has a disadvantage. You will hardly make any profit during this period, so it is easy to finish the book.

其实本书在热血里面还算不错，就是战力有点乱。主角不像其他同人文那么无脑，不过虐主还是严重了点，但是能理解作者是为了让主角一步步变强，不过在fl写同人文的话还是不要这么虐比较好，可以无脑，但是不要太虐了。这么多章下来还是看得到作者的文笔进步的。加油吧，希望别跑路或者烂尾。

Come on, by the way, remind the author that the first-level gods are all born based on the laws of the world, which is equivalent to a part of the world. Most of them have their own responsibilities and are unconquerable. Without them, the world will be in chaos. For example, without the Phoenix King, the airflow will become chaotic. Without Lugia, The system of ocean currents will collapse, and the second-level gods with authority cannot be collected, because they have their own responsibilities like the first-level gods, so it is okay to collect mythical beasts, but they must not be powerful. The author can bring a racial setting to the mythical beasts, and can collect the mythical beasts without authority.

I won't go into the typos. I always emphasized that Jianwen was the emperor for four years, but I turned around and said that he had been the emperor for ten years. Potatoes and potatoes are obviously the same thing. Over and over again, one thing is written as two crops. It's okay to follow the trend. At least you have some ideas of your own. It seems that the protagonist did not accidentally time travel, but knew that he was going to time travel when he was born, so he learned everything and waited to show off his ambitions after time travel.

Went over to Lonely End of the World and Squirtle

Why isn't the protagonist called Cheng Ming?

What are you writing about? A mess

What did the protagonist see? So angry, so angry.

It's a bit similar to that review of Time and Space. . . .

They can still complete the task even if their dad isn't there

Author, I just read the first chapter. The Endless Fire Territory is the force created by Xiao Yan ascension to the world. Could his strength at that time be that of the Dou Emperor? The Xiao Yan you wrote is still very aggressive and has just broken through the Dou Emperor period. Is your story about the Endless Fire Realm reliable?

Who can tell me that the world of Emperor Domination is really so awesome that even a mortal can create infinite times with a single thought? The purity of the universe sea even makes him look unsurprised.

I feel like I can use the magical powers of the Five Emperors and Great Demons to train the five internal organs.

Will the apprentice have a little girl who is the incarnation of the ruthless empress?

I hope the author can stick to it

About Chapter 18 of Ye Shan Shen's book "The LCK starts with abusing the spring, and Eunjing returns to the LPL" The war is reignited, and the playoffs begin! Chapter review.

The novel about Yao Aiguo and Yao Weiguo is exactly the same, but they just changed their surnames.

If you write like this, sooner or later you'll be done with it