People Are Doing Commissions in Various Comics, and They Are Competing for Me!

Even in games, adventurers are basically omnipotent and are essentially players. There is no reason to shrink from facing an NPC in a novel. In a game, people can rely on krypton gold to greatly increase their combat effectiveness. However, a system-savvy player in a novel is still restricted by an unknown character. To be honest, if you write it like this, you might as well give the protagonist an apostle-level strength at the beginning. Most readers of this novel are attracted by the introduction of this novel. From the introduction of this novel, it is obvious that the protagonist is the strongest person in the world, the strong man who takes everyone in the world to take off. Now this novel can be said to be completely inconsistent with the introduction. An unreasonable NPC has been given such powerful power by the author to target the protagonist, and the protagonist cannot resist it. All in all, at the beginning of this novel, C. C and Biana are two extremely failed characters. If I don't change my thinking now, this novel will come to an end.

I would like to give you a suggestion: add one setting to the settings after entering the dream bubble. After entering the dream bubble, the memories of the destiny walkers who embarked on the journey of destiny will be sealed, leaving only the memories of ordinary people before embarking on the journey of destiny.

Sister, are you sure you didn't choose a breastmilk just to seduce someone?

You have to summon Renekton, Nasus, Xerath, and Sivir to have a future.

The characters are not well written. Don't listen and just change them randomly. If you don't understand the characters, it's better not to change them or it will be a mess.

I want to know how many words the protagonist grows up.

The writing is rather dramatic. I haven't learned anything about the master's chat** + understanding. Who is the protagonist in the fantasy world? Who is that person in the chat**? It feels like you use chat** just to talk about the number of words. You are more novice than a novice and have no value at all...

The writing behind it is quite good.

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