The Demon Lord's Diary Is Exposed, and the Empress and Saintess Beg for Mercy

The male protagonist was so awesome in his previous life, so he didn't have a title like Demon Lord and Demon Emperor? It's just that the big devil is unqualified, and don't pretend to be a pig to eat the tiger. The subject matter is fine, but it depends on how you write it.

Now we are still crossing the border in Guzaowen. Can't TM be crushed by the realm?

The author doesn't read comments? This book seems to be off topic, right? The male protagonist is like a headless fly, and some of the rewards are messy. After writing so much, there is only one female protagonist, and the appearance content is very small. I will not give you data for the time being. I feel that you will be a eunuch sooner or later. The writing is not good, the plot is not good, and there is no attractive content.

I think your book, Lao Hunjun, is the most mature among all your books. It is attractively written and has zero poisonous points. Other books have more or less flaws that cannot be ignored. Your new book is actually not very comfortable to read, which shows that there is a disease focus. The future body setting of the protagonist lowers a lot of expectations. Although the protagonist does not live two lives again, there is not much difference between living two lives through the setting of a reborn person. There is also a contradiction between the future body and the present body, which is equivalent to the emergence of two personalities. And the One Permanent Certificate is not how you explain it. The One Permanent Certificate is to wrap up all timelines. There is no past and no future. It escapes from time and all parallel time and space and achieves the true and only true self. What past and future bodies do you have? It not only lowers the level, but also gives people the feeling of split personality, and is no different from a clone.

Let me see how you write?

It's a bit forced to create conflict, and even a little bit suppressing the level. One moment, it is said that it can compete with the fourth level, and the next time it is said that it can only be the fifth level after absorbing the dragon essence, and then it suddenly becomes the sixth level that can be promoted to the peak of the sixth level with more training. It was already the fifth level before, so why did it change back to the sixth level? Moreover, I was basically very confident in the beginning, the highest level is fourth level, but in the end, I said that I would not leave any trouble, but I didn't dare to kill him. Oiran ghost. It's so powerful, but it turns out that 10 days at a time is equivalent to 10 times the cultivation speed. If it is replaced with other one-times, even if 10 days becomes 10 years, it is just average, because as mentioned before, it takes more than ten years to advance to the first level.

Too watery, too many explanations, and repetitive content...

Also, what are the items that come out of your mall, the items that come from all kinds of worlds? Shouldn't the fantasy world be holy bodies or swordsmanship talents and other things?

The author is a common people, a low-class person. No matter how rich and powerful he is, he is still a low-class person. In the eyes of others, he is still a common people. They are all common people, common people, common people.

Regarding "The Devil's Diary is Exposed, the Empress and Saint Begs to Be Let Go" written by the Exiled Immortal from Heaven, Chapter 98: Create a Jade Butterfly? The Emperor's Summoner? Chapter review.