Comprehensive Comic: the Collapse Jade System at the Beginning, Breaking the Limit!
综漫：开局崩玉系统，打破极限！
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- Ongoing
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- 278k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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This setting of Imperial Court is really poisonous. When writing SCP, just write SCP honestly. It would be weird if you mess around like this and not get criticized.
Swordsmanship... Maybe it's a bit too cliché, but it's hard to say, it depends on the writing style - by the way, here's an interesting trivia: Japan's "Sword Master" is actually a "weapon master who is proficient in a variety of weapons", so shooting with a gun or throwing lime is a normal operation, even if you hold an ax or a two-handed sledgehammer well, you are still a "Sword Master". Skeleton King will come next time with more interesting or evil trivia.
The first few chapters seem a bit awkward to skip, but the later chapters are surprisingly good. They just strengthen Gensokyo's combat power a little more. The protagonist's abilities are quite handsome, and her personality is also given. Although there is a slight problem with the original female character, I write a variety comic for girls in variety comics. When writing an original character, you have to design it yourself. The plot is laborious but can be read if it's well written. If it's not well written, it will affect the whole book. However, if you don't write it in detail, you will be sorry for the character of the genius girl. At present, it seems that she is just a naive loli. To be honest, there are too many such characters in comprehensive comics. How to write it depends on whether the author wants to expand it in the future.
It looks good, it looks good, it could be updated a little faster. You're much better than that *shit with a 6.8 Rating. It's really good, not just a little bit, come on, come on
Isn't it possible to open the public screen in the peak competition?
The ** picture is not good-looking. If you search for a picture of Kaguya on the Internet, it will not look so bad.
It's a bit messy. Is it because the detailed outline was not done?
Coach Aogaku Ryuzaki has already pre-determined the number of official players. The maximum number of participants is Echizen Ryoma. Others are not eligible to participate. Just look at Kuao and the others. If you want to participate, others will give it to you. Basically, it is all pre-determined.
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