A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I, Han Laomo, Survived My Way to Sainthood

The writing is good, but the author talks too much, and there are hundreds of words of nonsense that cannot be corrected in the text. I feel like I am spending money to read his exceptional talk.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slight praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. When you are fifty years old, your name will be engraved on the long river of novels, and the Immortal Emperor will not be able to erase your mark. Your footprints will guide future generations in the streets and seas. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

Why does it feel different from the original works I have seen before? For example, I remember that the Little Green Bottle has nothing to do with Mr. Mo. Did the author read the anime version?

Please note that some plots are not good, the protagonist kneels down and so on

I seem to like it, but there doesn't seem to be any other good fanfics out there.

I have a question, why does the protagonist in the foundation-building stage have a consciousness comparable to that in the pill-forming stage?

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What kind of music are you writing about? The more I watch, the more I want to hit someone

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