Forest Patrol Daily: a Bear Cub Falls from the Sky at the Beginning

My family background is too poor to keep me safe.

The writing is okay, but I don't really like the relationship between the male protagonist and Qin. If you want to close it, you should close it quickly instead of leaving it ambiguous here. This kind of thing is really boring. I keep emphasizing what a scumbag is like, which makes me speechless.

So why does the author always write such unpleasant plots? Xiao Yu is like this, and this person named Mu is like this. If she is a female passerby, there shouldn't be so many plots. If she is the heroine, the writing is really annoying. I don't understand why the author wants to write that the protagonist saves Xiao Yu at the beginning. She is obviously a passerby character, but in the beginning It started out as if she was the heroine. If Xiaoyu didn't continue the live broadcast, then she should be the heroine. The following plot is about her becoming the heroine of the protagonist, but it is written that she continues to commit suicide. It is better to write it to death at the beginning. I hope the author will continue to work hard to improve his level and stop writing such plots.

It would be too much for the author to say that the wind is clear

It's okay to like a yandere, but it's even better if you're liked by a yandere, wholeheartedly, but don't be with the person the yandere likes, it's dangerous

It's too personal. I don't know what the author's experience is. The belittling of the protagonist in the original story is too obvious and highly personal.

Stop being so sarcastic, okay? Just because the protagonist's name contains the word "Fan", he is born with a sarcastic face? ? ? No matter how hard you try, the protagonist will always be ridiculed by various people. This looks like the style of painting from 15 or even 20 years ago, right? Shen Nong is dead, so he has to burn paper. . .

The first chapter is outrageous. The protagonist is sometimes Chen Qing, sometimes Ye Qing, sometimes a true immortal, and sometimes a mysterious immortal? That's it for the first chapter, what about the rest?

I finally came across a book with illusion in the title, but I was hooked as soon as I read the introduction. What does this introduction have to do with illusion?

It's too much punishment. Nasida starts at the beginning. Are you really not afraid of being arrested by your uncle?

It has been said that understanding is against heaven, but where is it? You're just trying to suppress tens of millions of words without thinking, right? What's the use of writing 100 million words if no one will read the stupid thing? Not to mention playing Tathagata at the beginning, which is unbelievable. At least you have to pass the Black Wind Mountain to be like the Great Sage. After passing the Flame Mountain, you can directly resurrect the Great Sage and fight in the Heaven together. It's a little bit interesting. You are completely copying the game.

Cuddling with a girl and sleeping together! It's impossible for a normal man to not respond! Except for the eunuch and the male Tong, it is impossible for them to have no reaction. If the protagonist is given a penis to shrink into the abdomen, it can be explained. If Yang and Xiaoyang put their hands on the bed, they can know that the protagonist is a man. This writing does not look good!

Your article is not decorated with gorgeous language, but it touches readers with plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the selection of materials is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, and concise It is rich in meaning and can be called a model article! This article shows extraordinary literary skills despite its plainness. It can be said that every word is precious and every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is elusive for us. From an artistic point of view, this article still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. Also, the use of punctuation marks is even more appropriate. After reading your article word for word, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time! How could there be such a penetrating article in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world." Please accept my knees! By the way, a few more chapters

Isn't it nonsense for Zhong Yuemin to join the militia in the army compound? His age is not suitable for him.

The author should not engage in such timing. Or don't send it

The plot is cliche and the writing is average

How many levels has a case been upgraded to in a row? From level one to level three in one stage! In Chapter 49, he was promoted to Deputy Secretary of the Department, funny! No matter how great your achievements are, they must be settled, otherwise everything will be in chaos!

Amazon Survival also comes with five oil bottles, two vases plus three no-brainers, and the one with the female celebrity in the wilderness in the stove is not one that can be seen.

Description from the book: The protagonist picks up a tiger and a tiger with one hand. In the next sentence, he lifts Gungun with the other hand. Does the protagonist have three hands?

The protagonist did not realize the true value of the item at all

Marshal Hua is Fu Hua's peer, right?

Your horse has already been killed, so why are you still here to fight back?

作者，第一代铠甲和第二代都是封印，不是打爆了，这都分不清楚

It's not a big problem, go for it!

Although it is an inventory article, the author is not good at all. Compared with the two recent Feilu books, the author can be said to be completely incompetent. Mainly I want everyone to see very creative second-generation content. This is my purpose.

I just discovered that this author seems to be exposed through live broadcasts

Sports anti-Japanese drama

About Lao Qi, "One hundred percent caught with bare hands, the whole world knelt down" written by the Sword Immortal 17. Just these people? Do you look down on me too much? Chapter review.

It's just that the update is a little slow, but it looks okay.

Do you think it's possible for the tires to withstand temperatures of at least two to three hundred? And the aircraft engine. Do you think it's possible that 50 or 60 degrees is not enough to cause the aircraft engine to stall?