
Siheyuan: After Driving Me Away, Their Nightmare Began
四合院:赶走我后,他们噩梦开始
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- Completed
- Length
- 443k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Film & TV Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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9.7 · 796Score
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Not very good, The background is complicated. To be honest, I just came to see Pili. You made this background so confusing. Why is it that the younger brother and CEO make the protagonist look embarrassed? The protagonist is both an anchor and a professional player. What have you written after reading five chapters? There are all kinds of past lives, and the protagonist has many awesome professions, which are all meaningless and just made me feel annoyed. Wouldn't it be better to just write that my predecessor in time traveled back and wanted to start a business and ran away on my own? Moreover, there is also a problem with this editing contest. Others are led by the You official, who can remain impartial, etc., But a few good guys turned into the protagonist and CEO's younger brother. They also signed up the protagonist and made the protagonist embarrassed, okay? What's the point? You can't have the protagonist fighting over the family property with your brother, right? The protagonist's family has hundreds of billions of assets. Can't they reconcile again? You can't compete with your younger brother just because Pili is the protagonist of the puppet show, right? This is the brother of the CEO, a professional player, and a host. Are you in this state?
Many people have died in the last days, and there is enough food for 5 years. Why are so many people grabbing food?
To be honest, author, what can you say about your writing? It is very messy, and it can basically be said to be a running account. When writing about business, many things must be logical. You cannot say that I want to work in this industry, and then the next sentence says that I have already done it, and it is developing very well. It makes people feel outrageous to read it this way.
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